flash |vs| Jen-Aral

yo thanks for the votes people...and camrok...i know the battle between the 2 of us i came mad hard but it was a bunch of bullshit that i got dq'ed buts its coo

uppinnnnn

ok, ill start off with saying, this wasnt a very strong battle, both lacked in consistancy, with the punches... and thats what battling's about mainly.... but outta the 2 flash took the punches, just..... but his verse was also more creative and better thought out... the opener and closer were stronger too..... all in all ive gotta go with flash on this....vote=flash... both need to work on hit'n tho..... but keep at it....

Bad battle......
overall both had weak punches, horrible meti4's....flo all over the place,
And abolutly no personals what so ever...

What is there to talk about here then?....
Structure- Jen (flash wasnt as consistant, Jen was a lil bit better)
^^sad thats what i base this whole battle on...

vote- jen

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aight, here it is.

Multies:flash
Personal’s:none
Punches:flash
Flow:tie
Eye Opener’s:flash
Vocab & Complexity:none
POLL Vote___flash

i thought that flash had better punches Overall. That Jason Kidd Line
was clever, flowed well and worded good. JEN, your flow started off well for the first 2 3 bars then your flow, ryme scheme totally cahnged.
didnt like the switch very much. Plus weak Finisher. In my opinion.


Me_____VERSES_____INFINIT SKILLZ
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