It Vs Venom

Close this battle............................................ ......

punches; venom
structure;venom
intro;venom
outro;none
flow;both
other;none

vote; venom
venom gets my vote coz it was sum tite shit. u both ad good verses, IT u just needed to structure it a bit better. venom was better and had more direct punches, but it weren't all that.
well done anyway to u both.
since i voted on urs can u vote on mine.
mr.w.rite v kurrupt

upin5
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LMFAO......this battle was one sided.........

it - structure was good........flow was on target........vocab was good.........some of the multis were tight.........nice wordplay.........i was feelin most of ya punches.........some of ya personals were tight.......

venom - wack structure........flow fell off.......vocab was ok........multis were ok........no good wordplay.........i thought most of ya punches were wack.......no personals......

conclusion - it takes this in structure, flow, multis, wordplay, punches, and personals so he gets my vote.....

VOTE - IT

wow it won hands down....jeese....what an eay W.....
he had much better punches structure etc etc he wiped the floor with venom....
venom elevate.....take on sum noobs b4 challenging a good person
peace

venom had a better flo and better punchlines but not a good structure
it had a good flow and structure but his punches wernt hard enough
vote-venom
hit up my battle
vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371

People are voting for me but it doesn't even count???????

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109453
yo venoms.....chek in dis battle dawg.......u accepted but neva chek in....
****srry 2 freepost***
but it really won this battle dawg......
venom- structure waz off.....punches weak....n flow waz ite
it- good shyt......punches on da mark.....nice flow n structure
vote: it
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