Telekinetic vs Avenge

Just a few more votes.......................
Come on.................

Avenge Know To Open-Spits…
Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips
Shit…This Kid Is More Hyped Up To Fail Then The Olsens Tits
Kid Can’t-Be-Serious, The Mans-Delirious…
If He Had Twins He Still Couldn’t Get A Double-You
You Future’s Relation Is ‘Calculated’ In ‘Mathematic Equations’
Me + Battle – Tele= “Trouble-4-You
I Rattle Ya Rhymes Till Rubble-Is-Spewed…
You Couldn’t Blow Phat Rhymes Exhalin Bubbles Of Food
To Put It Simple,Your Screwed…This Kid Is Oblivious, He Don’t Know What To Do
You Fairly Winnin Is Impossible, Less Plausible Than Etheopians Openin-Food
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whack structure fix this shit up 7/10
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Location Dope? Where you at im there you must be out 2 lunch
Especially after the one two Taktik gave your ass in the 1 2 punch
Man your 16 an already disabled to skill clumsy bet you fall alot
Speakin of fallin on new years he set wishin HIS balls would drop
Call the cops I mangled you in four lines the battles over ring the bell
Ding ding TKO 0 an l your wack as hell an delivered more than mail
This guys mouth is like an ass of a dog no place like home hey toto?
Go there with your dog shit ohh an for gods sake stop eatin that alpo
The pure designs of your rhymes are signs of a disease like the clap
But chances of you gettin claps here are Slim Jim you gettin snapped
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8/10 better approach werdplay was better nice structure
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vote/telekinetic


drop a favor cuz i took the time u take the time too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108069

welp in my opinion avenge took this one easy cause he had more of a flow, punches were weak except for the one by telekinetic but his shit was 2 stretched out and ya'll both need 2 elevate and good verses both of u juss work o punches, but my VOTE=Avenge

Hit this battle up honestly it's about 2 get slept on please hit it up since I did hit yours up and took time wit it, please vote> 6th Grade New Patriots!

wrong link haha my fault here it is and everyone please vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108019

i dont know what the fuck half of these cats read but i KNOW
AVENGE TOK THIS EASILY

HE HAD BETTER VOCAB-MULTIS-PUNCHES AND PERSONALS.... FLOW WAS A BIT CHOPPY AND HARD 2 FOLLOW AT SOME PARTS BUT ALL IN ALL A GOOD VERSE

tELE----NEEDS 2 UP HIS VOCAB...FLOW WAS PRETTY NICE BUT THERE WASNT ANY REAL PUNCHIN DONE BY HIM


SO MY VOTE

AVENGE