Telekinetic vs B.rantis

votes with tele for obvious reasons above


v- tele

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basically everything wise ways said here..

aight battle....on tha verge of weak..

Seemed close but Tele definately got this cuz
of metas....wordplay... punches... and personals
B.. came with those too.. just tele edged you out in all of them

so

v/Tele


agreed^^

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Ight Break down
Punches- both came hard, Both had good creativity n down falls to their punches,
But I think Telekinetic's were delivered harder,
Wordplay- B.R, Used some elementary words,nothing special...Tele's wordplay had more of a selection of words, bigger and better.
flow-like I said becuase of the weak wordplay sometimes the flow was off in B.r.'s shit
so I think tele had the better flow.
structure- Both structures were weak and yall need to work on them,

v/ Telekinetic

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This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this
B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis)
opening is alright... punch was ok, personal is alright
Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED
alright personal, not that hard hitting though... follow through is pretty good
You got no referrals, yea really nobody would unless they was insane
Cause just the lines above shattered you like a window I bring the pain (window pain)
not that good of a punch, seemed more like a filler
Im rippin veins an arteries you haven't even began to scratch the surface
You're just a freeloader on this sight uppin post counts your only purpose
follow through isnt a bad punch, metaphor in the setup is decent
I just ended this guys amazing 5 post career with 10 lines that I wrote
Shit I didn't even have to throw any punch lines cause this kids the joke
good ending.. punch was alright, meta was straight

over all your flow was alright, no multis, metaphors werent bad, personals were ok, your verse was decent



Like John Travolta you should face it Telekinetic
cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks
ok attemp at a personal punch, needs a little rewording.. follow through was alright. nothing to hard
unless you bummy like yourself, broke with an 86 chevy,
like it says your a flyweight, my rhymes are heavy
metaphor on the follow through is alright.. setup could have come off better
My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours
tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse
follow through concept was alright, set up was alright
and i know u thinkin' " why B. Game bustin on me?"
because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3
lol good follow through punch
Your 3-3 im sorry to say its the unwritten law,
im keepin a donut in my loss column, ur simply played out like pogs
sort of a weak ending.. not much of a punch, or meta.. nothing to hard

your verse was alright, had flow, no multis.. the metaphors were alright


Vote- telekinetic
He hit with harder punchs, and hada little bit better metaphors..

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