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hm....close battle.....it fix yer bars, shorten them a little....other doods structure was alright....metas were good here...it's were betteer///punches were tied id say, both hit pretty hard.,..complexity was in its favor lotta complex lines...personals goes to it....he just had more they were blah....730 had like n 2-3 nice pucnhes...it had some good hgard htting ones as well....overall i vote it for more consistant verse...better dissing
ok i need 1 more vote obviously i won if i got 4 votes so someone give me the last vote please
730 - structure was good, flow was good, some of the multis were ok, wordplay was ok, i wasnt feelin most of ur punches, no good personals
it- structure was ok, flow was pretty good, tight multis, i was feelin most of ur wordplay, most of ur punches hit hard, nice personals
conclusion - it takes this in multis, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote......
VOTE - IT