sorry Los Rojas but no you can't. stop making excuses and get it through ya dumb ass thick skull, no you can't.
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sorry Los Rojas but no you can't. stop making excuses and get it through ya dumb ass thick skull, no you can't.
let me tryout peep look at the battles in my sig.
yo spit knows my style........see it dere.........
yo blu, you best call for back-up....cuz my lines gon tear your track up....
yo blu, you best call your crew cuz...this bwoy lookin for you and....
rude boy you best call the feds cuz......this boy gon steal all your bread...said
rude boy you best stay away cuz....this man is ready to spray so....
a shell a day, keep the doctor in pay....
down for the NHS so i pop everyday...
and i drop these lines SUPERBERLY.....
and you cant say a word to me.....
cuz i start world wars like germany...
non of your lines are hurtin me....
cuz i beat up m.cs verbally.....
yo...
whos that white boy with your sister ??
whos that white boy? he jus kissed her...
and il leave cum stains on the sluts bed covers...
so bring your dad and bring your brothers....
you'll get decked on the floor with the others.....
thts a little piece i made for an audio........but im only a textcee on here.........so hit me back man......
Since I am the one recruiting i guess I say.................
In
to both candidates....word add em into the sigs if you rep the whole crews names in thier if not u 2 boys use my kritikal sig and put it in urs....peaceezy
Yo you gonna drop a topic for me I wwant in... So drop so that I can spit my shit...
I did its sleeping in hells fiery lake
I dropped it for you two pages ago....i think and pm'ed it to u...but there u go
Sleeping in Hells Fiery Lake....go to it
I seen the light excite all the freaks/
Stack mad chips, spread love with my peeps/
Niggaz wanna creep, got ta watch my back/
Think the Cognac and indo sack make me slack?/
I switches all that, cock-sucker G's up/
One false move, get swiss cheesed up/
Clip to Tec, respect I demand it/
Slip and break the, 11th Commandment/
Thou shalt not fuck with raw G-Docta/
Feel a thosand deaths when I drop ya/
I feel for you, like Chaka Khan I'm the don/
Pussy when I want Rolex on the arm/
You'll die slow but calm/
Recognize my face, so there won't be no mistake/
Cuz you know that fuckin with MIC,it aint safe/
Thoughts?
Well mic I can tell you one thing....if you thought that out...umm it looks like u keystyled it but...elevation my friend....if u let me see one of your battles if u do battle I'll see what it looks like....or give me an OM or a topical you wrote and we'll see what that looks like and I'll get back to u.....but nice structure tho...i must say, although it would do u good to take thos / backslashes offa the end of ur bars...
yo im new to this but im improvin........heres one of my newer battles......1....hit me up wit feedbac or somthin.....
aim-youngbld231
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163891
backslashed off the bars? I love backslashes! I use those even when I write in my books.
so im in then yeh ? well whos your graphix man........get him to pm with the crew sig or sutin n gimme the scoop..........safe
Doc funk is our GFX man...and I have the crew sig in my sig it says kritikal...thats the one for the crew but if you want a special sig u can talk to him about it...
And c'mon Doc, I hate backslashes....they look so herbish when u use them, I really think it makes the structure look bad but, if your writin in your books then thats probably the stuff you spit onto a beat over a mic...not sayin that always happens but usually you wouldn't post it as text on a site...maybe its just me tho...doesn't matter..
^^^ ayo man...work on your punches and come back, cuz it didn't look like you really threw any in that battle as D-bate said, I think you have potential and we can work with that but you should work on your flow and punches, then come back and talk to me...wordQuote:
Originally Posted by ThE ReAlEsT OnE
yo yo can i post something up.......Im new but I think I got some skills...