if you don't see why that is wrong, then you need to open your eyes, dude didn't even say anything.Quote:
Originally Posted by clout
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one of my votes > life time of yalls votes lol
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if you don't see why that is wrong, then you need to open your eyes, dude didn't even say anything.Quote:
Originally Posted by clout
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one of my votes > life time of yalls votes lol
ya that @Clout vote was hog wash
that how everyone use to vote tho when clout and I started here.
yea i know, it just needs to be better, see a lot of shit like that.Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
but hey I got the win so who gaf lmao
ya but its nice to know wtf you need to fix. I would always PM useless aka Ronin asking wtf is wrong with my wording but he never could explain it. but every vote against me was because my wording is month old dumpster trash.
Guys look Amen and joog would break shit down and tell you how you should have worded a punch or what killed your bar.
Behemoth vs Cody is open for votes.
yea thats what i do I break down each bar, and I don't just say, aight, nah, nope either.Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
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i mean i don't care about needing to know what to fix cuz its all relative and most of these dudes speak out there ass anyway, but atlteast a solid explanation that lets me know u read my shit.
I've been doing that "Nah " if its a complete miss. or if its light I'll explain why
1 bar
---- sentence expo
2 bar
----- sentence expo
3 bar
------ sentence expo
feedback
same for both battlers, then final expo is my structure usually
If you want advice do it outside of the battle. When niggas box its 10-9 10-9 10-9 it's not. I thought you did good, but you need to work on your jab, you missed stop many hooks etc.
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Too many hooks*
This.Quote:
Originally Posted by Donald Trump
sup thoQuote:
Originally Posted by Donald Trump
Sup spree,
I'm not going to put more effort in a vote than a nigga did in a verse lmao
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I was ahead of my time dog, good to see all the shit I was doing for leagues in being implemented into the site. Like the hidden vote shitQuote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
shits kinda picking up now. but GOW doing a bunch of shit to this place and we've had some set backsQuote:
Originally Posted by Donald Trump
Word, niggas was pointers and shit
Yep which is dumb since this shit is all preference, there is no right and wrong way to do niggas just like different things. I've dropped shit where one person says it's dope and someone says its weak lol they could've written a book each about that line and it wouldn't of helped me.Quote:
Originally Posted by Notti
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That's good. I had so many ideas for this place people just never listened. Another thing I strongly believe and I call the knowp effect is people shouldn't battle in sections they mod because there are a bunch of idiots here who will be scared to vote against them.Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree