Elevation Thread.

that shit was good man i like it from beginning to the end

im insane
i stick 12 inch nails in my nose to reach my brain
i wanna see if i would live if i let 5 gallons of my blood drain
i walk to the white house
singing with my guns out
wetting in the air until my rounds run out
im in the yard as soon as the sun out
in a raincoat withe my ass showing to everybody when they come out
i aint insane im just crazy
that want michael jackson that was me dangling his baby....
over the balcony
so be careful where u go and remember look out for me

n/t grim reaper

that sounds like an old school slim shady song about being crazy
its nice an all, just needs better rhythm
kept me laughin a lil

im the reaper, i kill you without that knife or whatjamacallit
ill light u up with my 40 cal, jus get ready to bawl kid
My mind is crazy, i kill babies then play games with the devil
dont keep ya teks out ill wipe the "Best Out" like ya name was Bezel
listen to my words, i start earthquakes when people hear my syllables
ill start fires, tornados, riots, anything to get rid of you
i murk you prostitutes like its a crime to hoe
when i tap you on ya shoulders that means its ya time to go

n/t-the government

I don't know too much bout government cause that shit can be a bore...
But I have been paying more attention concidering every generation has a war...
Or-more..than one, I do know bout Cheney's accident wit da gun...
How's that happen?!..he's got to have twenty CIA agents in action while he was clappin...
I do feel BUSH had good means but now he's lost in his own world...
Now all tha country seems stuck in what seems like a permanent whirl...
Yeah, some ask, "Why go after Hussein?"-"Why fly Bin Laden's family home on our planes?!"
If you ask me..tha government's a game...
Ones who start out wit loose change..want power so they build up...
Then its in their hands if tha world fucks up...
So get ya education, and make a huge impact...
N' maybe we'll have no more Vietnam's, Gulf's n' Iraq's....


topic: Playing basketball

My bad ya'll...


Y0 KING you stayed on topic wit "The Reaper"-I liked some lines and tha way it was flowin in my head..shit was good man, nice!

got some good verses in this niggah..
looks loike some words were added to leathin your thread a lil bit hommie..
keep up though good shyt..

your a imatater wanna be a laker ..
not a shot faker or a shot maker..
shock clock violation your a immatation..
go take a vacation im the new sinsation..
i am a baller..
to the ladies i holla..

look at me i move my feet..
you cant play offense or play d..
keep your head up look at me..
shot clock bang i hit that 3..

T.P. =spitting game

that was good at staying on topic.but you need to up ya vocb..more complicated words..tha multis was good but if you add more words and description bettew tha multis it'll be alot better..


im not going by the next topic but i stay spittin game
im here to lift tha game,J jackin JOOKZ get tha name
vocals on fire its tha humn torch so you get rip to flames
its baby ace,a loser with a shady face,a 16 post noweight
your a good rapper no way,u by tha ocenside ya name Jose?
u tha same age as me but i got the better skillz,i wont regret this kill
this ain a basketball game but ya life im here to steal,im forever real
what i juss said might put you in shock like an electric eel,ill get
u hooked like a rod and reel,but listen this is more complex then fishin
why you so ugly?well my girls are here n will have u itching for a licking
you wanna be like me but u dreaming n im not a Genie so ur left wishing...


next topic,write a verse ne verse but with tha most compex vocab u know

Lyricall talent wastin beneath Oceans
Massive Slaughter I am the Killing Potion
Halocaust type destruction of Conscience
Females Vibrating just so they can Flaunt it
Harrasment of Text these are Replacable Artists
Pyrotechnic in the game Im a Fire Starter
Massive mountains of Words and Bars
Giving Homosapians a Glimpse of Stars
Morals and life exsitence altogether
Making harsh reality seem light as a Feather

N//t If Jesus was Aborted (Abortion)

there would be no earth. Hell set right in, left a curse.
the under be up like a bar flip, but be burnin way worse.
not a drink to cure our thirst, My God would be too hurt.
Jesus too much worth! I'd say, he'd have been dead first.
he had a purpose, been complete everything sits at his feet.
he only suffered one defeat, never again, will he be beat.
let you know he sows what u reap, dont amount to a heap.
the devil would have our greens, our minds power controled.
longing to prevail like i said, a tall tale, he'll never be as bold.

ooops next topic ------------------ UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

a hate when niggas cant do shit right^

*walks in looks :wtf: nobody left feedback on my drop..shakes head n walks out*

damn i need a topic......(waiting).........(still waiting) ......................

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Originally Posted by JOOKZ

that was good at staying on topic.but you need to up ya vocb..more complicated words..tha multis was good but if you add more words and description bettew tha multis it'll be alot better..


im not going by the next topic but i stay spittin game
im here to lift tha game,J jackin JOOKZ get tha name
vocals on fire its tha humn torch so you get rip to flames
its baby ace,a loser with a shady face,a 16 post noweight
your a good rapper no way,u by tha ocenside ya name Jose?
u tha same age as me but i got the better skillz,i wont regret this kill
this ain a basketball game but ya life im here to steal,im forever real
what i juss said might put you in shock like an electric eel,ill get
u hooked like a rod and reel,but listen this is more complex then fishin
why you so ugly?well my girls are here n will have u itching for a licking
you wanna be like me but u dreaming n im not a Genie so ur left wishing...


next topic,write a verse ne verse but with tha most compex vocab u know

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Props to a kid who can follow rules correctly.

Nice verse. Working multies. the more multies the better. Like first place...birthday...or rotten responses....gotten me nauseous. Ya feel me? Also use sum wordplay to really get the reader interested. Creativity is ok...but use the creativeness effectively. Don't make it sound random shit just coming out. Make it nice n keep working on it till its balance. Keep at it holmes.

Such offenses are endless hence which has filled me with vengence
Neva can i suspend this but constantly i fucken piss on them dumbshits
All this discrimination upon this nation makes me go crazy from the mayhem
The pain from all this hatin has made me lose patience to murder a timeline of ages
My old crew apotheosis has been lost since faggot Celestial camee across it
And since then...such monstrous animosity responsibly...
.............has gotten in this mosh pit where even god can't stand upon this
My face may appear to be scary....as i make all fags dissapear carefully
Such faceless tears have made me angry...fear has quickly been changin me
Now i've murder my mother, father, sisters n brothers, n all other members
Making me an offender with a message sending hell to all wrenders of enders

New topic: We All Fall Down

nigga thats gangsta az fuk! a new noch to the word lyrical/
combinded with ones emotions so i comprehend its spiritual/
a scripture written miracle but yet a tad bit sinicle/
i rip mc's till u couldnt recognize them physical/
unorganized flow with numeric random syllables/
far from original, now-n-day rap is gay/
we got niggas like young jeezy makin billions off "HEY"/
wuts to say, those wit skill dont make it at all/
so its a fight to the top with continuous falls/
continuous brawls by mc's wit vigorous balls/
im sharp az a jaw wit teeth that cut faster then saws/
pressing the pause wont help u understand my flow/
im shocking spectators till they think there able to glow/
or unable to stand from the force my metaphors throw/

now i will come through and blast u wit a scooby doo
when ur dead i will make sure nobody knows you
ha ha ur funny kinda like a bunny
ok so go and tell ur dad sonny
well hes ma and thats all i gotta say
good day!!!!