bro atleast yours was able to be graded no 1 even dropped their verse except me in my battle and the people i battled were suppose to be "vets" and didnt even show :banghead:Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Crucial_Times~
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bro atleast yours was able to be graded no 1 even dropped their verse except me in my battle and the people i battled were suppose to be "vets" and didnt even show :banghead:Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Crucial_Times~
yah. heh i suppose so. congradulations on making it to the next round. good luck to ya homie. i believe in ya.Quote:
Originally Posted by Urban_Myth
No problem man, your verses just came across very novice in feel, but as it stands you guys are new to this. This is the reason I advise kids not to talk, because no matter how much talk you do, only your display matters. Well it was nice that you guys got an introduction to the topical scene, its a very rough one to make a name in. You lucked out and got matched against a non power house team, so it could have went either way. I suggest you guys use this experience to grown into your skills. Make a name for yourself, before the Write of passage 3 tourney, because if you are not one of the best, you will not be included. WoP is what makes legends legends...Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Crucial_Times~
bro atleast yours was able to be graded no 1 even dropped their verse except me in my battle and the people i battled were suppose to be "vets" and didnt even show
^ As posted by urban myth.
Trust me when I say you were extremely lucky they did not show, I place more emphasis on mindless. Both are great poets, but mindless has a better topical game than fresh prince, doesn't matter because either one could have keyed up a verse that would have won your round. I did read your verse and like I said, you were lucky this time. Next round you better come prepared to flip a topic and take a twist that no one else even thought of before. Trust me, next round you will need more than luck, that is if the matches stay as we discussed ealier. You guys need to read more, open up your creative windows so to speak. Give me an idea of your writting ritual, and I'll make suggestions that can improve your performance,cuz if you don't have one, you are fucked....
thanx for coming in and talking to us bounce. thanx for the da feedback. me and LL will keep doing our thing and elevating. i know wat u mean by wat u said "This is the reason I advise kids not to talk, because no matter how much talk you do, only your display matters." i'll keep working for real Bounce. i promise you i won't let u down. I will keep putting my heart in rap and keep reaching out for more ideas and more ways to elevate. thank u again.
Silent J...he's right by sum ways. but i believe in ya no matter what. i believe we all have sumthing inside of us that can make us do sumthing extraordinary. and that holds for u too. keep going homie. and look at this side....even if u do not make it....learn from it...and keep going. disappointments are not meant to put u down and make u stop...they are there to keep u strong and to keep u with an open mind and to keep trying. and over time...u become better at things. keep it up homie. me and the rest of the crew are behind u.
You should be worried about letting YOURSELF down, don't do it for the crew, don't do it for me, but do it for yourself. In life fuck everyone else, NEVER let yourself down.... Then and only then will you be in the position to NEVER let those around you down...Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Crucial_Times~
that meant alot to me. truly meant alot. thank u bounce. i guess...i say that cuz i care bout my friends....i've pretty much let myself down. i'm kind of in a state of confusion nowadays and can't seem to get outta it. which is why i focus more on others. but i will keep wat u said in mind. specially this "NEVER let yourself down.... Then and only then will you be in the position to NEVER let those around you down..." i will work on this. thanx again.Quote:
Originally Posted by Bounce
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Originally Posted by Bounce
yo heres my tryout iight
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=198058
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Originally Posted by ~G~
LMMFAO...
ghetto. keep elevating. elevate on structure. u have sum nice vocab. but elevate on structure, flow, wordplay, and harder punches (and personals). i feel ya still could elevate a lil more before u get in the crew. get ur posts up. get up the record a lil more. and work more on ur spits. keep writing. i feel u have great potential. but ur not there just yet. keep writing and maybe after a few weeks of hard working...try out again. pz. good luck to ya :thumbup:Quote:
Originally Posted by ghettogangsta
Bounce.....Right now there are like a ton of free posters......More than you expect Ive seen it so much
I think wat he's trying to say is that just becuz there are other freeposters. does not mean u have to make the same mistake as they did. for them...them freeposters sooner or l8ter will get banned. i think wat he's trying to say is not to follow their path. not picking sides. no hate. just tellin ya wassup. :thumbup:Quote:
Originally Posted by ~G~
I just feel im being picked on...
errrr...well i guess u've earned urself quite a reputation. not the good one either :laugh: as far as freeposting. fix ur mistakes. and that will change. guaranteed. u will get a better respect.Quote:
Originally Posted by ~G~