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Originally Posted by LadySpit

got room for a lady...............

palms and pistols/
chew thru palms,arms, and grissles/
dis-arm ya squad like parapaligic missles/
as ur flesh gets tickled and torn by for nickles/
my crew sits back and pull out ur mamas intestines/
tryin to run wit animosty,to show em im fabulous/
gav u 7 lines an their all visious

wats good.what do yall think???

i used n one of the other forums but wat do u think

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ladyspit. no hate to ya. and honestly this is not my decision. but i think ya need a lil work on ur spit. try to get into sum battles. get known around here. and elevate. try to add length to ur lines. ya have sum nice vocab. keep trying to work on ur wordplay. it was a lil creative. but i still think ya need sum work on ur raps. looked like u were just spitten. try to...when ur rappin...have a direction. have a plan with wat ur tryin to get at. keep writin. check back in a couple weeks after sum serious elevation.

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Originally Posted by KALIKOZE911

bb in a little while gotta run out homies..... about 1/2 hr. pz

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pz out homie.

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Originally Posted by ~Crucial_Times~

ladyspit. no hate to ya. and honestly this is not my decision. but i think ya need a lil work on ur spit. try to get into sum battles. get known around here. and elevate. try to add length to ur lines. ya have sum nice vocab. keep trying to work on ur wordplay. it was a lil creative. but i still think ya need sum work on ur raps. looked like u were just spitten. try to...when ur rappin...have a direction. have a plan with wat ur tryin to get at. keep writin. check back in a couple weeks after sum serious elevation.

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very well put......

thank u.

yeah way better then what i was going to say like her name shoudl be lady swallow not spit hahah but anywasy whats up crucial you get them lines done

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Originally Posted by silent j

yeah way better then what i was going to say like her name shoudl be lady swallow not spit hahah but anywasy whats up crucial you get them lines done

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hahahahaha............NO

anyway thanks for tha feed back

still workin on it. i'm takin this topical battle between me and Illunatic very seriously.

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Originally Posted by LadySpit

hahahahaha............NO

anyway thanks for tha feed back

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np. just keep workin at it. i respect ya fo tryinout. not tryin to be a downer. just keep doing wat ya doing.

can i try out

yeah thanks for trying out lady swallow i mean spit and anyways whats up crew

working on my verse lol.

sweet im so bored haha and hey crucial we keep the king in d/l haha

d/l?

let me try out

get in a battle. then drop a link.