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you did yo thang thatz kool...
my crew iz no good, leave u draped in red like a clipper.. .
im rollin down yo hood,the gaps on my lap like a stripper ...
i trust my shotty,haterz i be wettn em..
my slugz peel they skin,like a snake i be sheddn em..
my click iz so real,real g'z wear white teez...
stomp you like shit on my air max nineteez...
my pistols longer than shaqs kikz...
we leave yah crew like my dick wrapped in plastic...
n/t:pussy
good rymes but it wasnt really bout the topic runninng from the PoPo.So the topic now is pussy not that orginal but all welll.
girl why you being such a wussy/
wimpiring as i beat that pussy/
pimping you girl please dont push me/
all night long girl thats how i do it/
all night long putting ya through it/
hot sweaty sex all night long/
doing it to the early dawn/
new topic:Mainstream Hiphop
You stayed on topic playa but it was kinda weak, soft and no effort put towards it....nice doh'
Mainstream Hip Hop
Fifty Cent, The Game...now they got mainstream beef...
Mainstream hip hop isn't when you beef in tha street
Mainstream hip hop is when you've made it big sellin records, radio play...
Mainstream hip hop is workin hard in tha studio everyday
Makin classic records like DRE to show to tha world
Thats what mainstream hip hop is to tha boys and girls
Favorite videos being played on MTV & VH1
Mainstream is not knowing anything bout tha underground guns'
Mainstream has put out many legends
But underground there are some major weapons
"Hi my name is..." is mainstream hip hop
Not you and ya crew on tha corner rappin to tha beatbox
^^^ i dunno ^^^ ha ha
t0pic: disgusting pictures of your bestfriend fuckin a dog
Not bad, you got your point across. Try using more complex ryhme schemes.
My best friend, i can't believe,
commited beastiality,
she normally doesn't go as far, just topless pics.
theres a pic of her in your sig.
when im not bonin her, she's bonin me.
there is sexyness in what i see.
my dicks risin, i can't believe it
im gettin horny.
the desk is risin my monitor is tilted,
over beastiality!
What the fook is wrong with me!
I guess i'm just a sucker for a hot chick,
or i'm fuckin totally sick!
N/T Generic rap attacking progression
you stayed on topic which is good and probably hard to do with that sorta weird topic so it was good.Not sure what you mean Generic rap attacking progression but im a do my verse on what i think you mean.
you mother fucking punk ass bitch’s is stupid/
talking bout your positions man that shit isn’t music/
making up some storys like that shit really happend/
and its whispering now doggs are barely rapping/
quit the yackking and backpacking all that shit talking/
this game is not for pussies so yall can keep walking/
don’t even look me in my eyes you aint respectful/
fuck all of yall wanna be cool we wont get to /
you come my way you just be talking bout yourself/
im a dig a ya grave and put your fucking casket in myself/
I don’t know what happened but its gotta go back/
im speaking to the kings the forefathers of rap/
do something quick please this is not the way/
this is not what they intended for the game today/
that shit up there was hard
i liked that shit
but since you aint leave a topic i'll leave one
n/t nasir jones
I don't think you stayed on topic too well, and you didn't leave a topic for tha next MC...pay attention to detail cubscout....
Not leavin me a topic...thats fuckin funny junior
I guess thats why this clown calls himself...IllHumor
I split this clown down like logs being chopped in two
N' not wit an axe JayHull mauls on through
I'm doggin you playboy...so come back wit an ill verse
You a bitch...all you need is tha high-heels and a Coach purse
next topic: Kats not understanding cypher rules
i liked that
thats right murk them niggas who dont follow the rules
im tired of niggas not follwing the rules to the cypher
im thinking about heating they ass up like a lighter
i blow pipes like rowdy piper
they all blow dicks
wanna rap in these cypher but cant show shit
cuz when u cant follow rules yo flows really dont matter
its probally cuz they suck and stuck on the elevation ladder
everybody verses phatter, only cuz they follow rules
if you dont im a run in ya house and make you swallow tools (guns )
and make my hollows prove that you need to abide
cuz if ya dont i dont know how the hell you'll survive
n/t lil wayne
lol ..... wot up wid dat?
u forgot to leave a new topic!
it was alright though
could have had a better structure
next topic: Kats not understanding cypher rules
why cant u do what ur told,it's plain an' simple/
u mustn't be sober or have less brains thena pimple/
peeps like me are like regulators,upsettin the haters/
makin them go down well i elevate like ridin esculators/
follow the topics,to the rules were all kinda hostages/
i chop up beef rollin punks up like grindin sausages/
it aint hard to do,dawmn u foo how smart are u/
get outta this thread an' move to park on the moon/
topic=rippin the mic
niggas is retarted man..lol
the topic was lil wayne
n/t means next topic
Im rippin the mic.. got thick a thick bitch who knows how to lick...you know
Savin her click for later, cus of the shitty topic that is full of self glory hoe.
Pityful.. Ima set a better topic... got my glock clicked.. locked and loaded
Workin an merkin niggas, got doe, flow, hoes, and much more..................
.................................................. ....................Its all part of show biz
Got strifflin niggas like you not following the cyper rules... yea bitch listen ^^
Sayin ya "hard" an ready to go... we know... but its only ya horny dick bitch
Topic:Its battle time
your stuff was tight. the structure was fucked up though. no hate but the flow was a little off also. the topic was pretty decent and played a little but you handled it pretty well. keep droppin homie. and keep elevatin.
yo Its battle time, and lets see who hits-the-mic-right,
I scare his face down, like this battle shits-a-fright-night,
its official, the coin was tossed, so lets hit the trenches,
im on the defence, as I take notice to his wack offences,
strip the mic from his hands, and kick somethin for a bonus,
Ill make this rapper, change his name to a rapper formally known-as.
his head remains down, and its time for my last punch-line,
shit I served more dishes, to this rapper then at lunch-time,
so I just run-mine, shit so ill, it could make the sun-shine,
and no remorse for this maggot, cause im spittin magic,
its tragic, cause I fucked this cat so bad, he turned a faggot.
Next Topic: lost love ones.
Good.. Not much else to say
The lost loved ones are the hardest to loose.. An Ive really been thinkin
Should I take her or my boose....I know I cant choose to stop drinkin....
See Ive known her for a while, I show respect and I always care an love her
Its REAL love, kinda like the professer in the movie flubber, except not rubber
Her LIFE REVOLVES around me.. But now its her dull and stone grave site.....
I dont know why she had to go.. Ill always remember those days an nights...
Topic:Rough Streets
the content isn't that bad. i know what you are saying but the way you put it together needs revisin. Keep elevatin.
London, England, there was a bomb,
the rough streets whe shared when he was young.
school was hard, a racist devide,
the fights, racial murders were hard to survive,
no guns, just barenuckle,
blade to the heart,
no laughs or chuckle,
left near death if owt starts.
streets are rough and racist round these parts,
im tough, and chasin my health in the dark.
next topic: Rap-pop destroying true rap art.
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