yo critical combination i got some battles now and i was wondering if one of yall could check them out and see if im good enough fo yall
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yo critical combination i got some battles now and i was wondering if one of yall could check them out and see if im good enough fo yall
^^^then drop a link or a verse
just go 2 da thread n drop a verse or link or somtin
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Call Me baby g i run ya timbs and now ya history niggaz don't know where i be at holla back if ya got them hollowtips wit da macks and if ya don't like flows den listen to my brick bones i got dem that be thinking that im frontin ya'll can spit in this game all you wantin im gonna make niggaz be crying on they kneez wish they were dying. UTICA FA LIFE BABY!!!!!
i kno i havent been around 4 a while but im a pretty dope textee, theres links in my sig but those r wak, look at da tryouts i got 4 Critical Combination cuz most my good shyt iz on otha sites n i usually dont start tryin til i get 2 da important battles n tourneys
k need to know asap how many can do a TNL battle so check in if u want in trying to do 3 vs 3 and don't slack bring ur best game to the table
ayo mane lose all cocepts souff still reppin nah lose be original aiight like T-I Grand Hustle and all taht Clova G's is a lame crew mane T-I killed em aiight
kk lemme see how thsi iwll go fa me
poetry ta me:
poetry to me is the ability
to free my mind of this mentality
pain flows like my blood stream
and pain stops like a murders adrenaline
fading slowly into the abyss of a dead man
knife in his heart and his kids unpunctured
he lived for us that was poetry of bein uncaptured
livin carefree and livin as if we were free
but the fact of bein to rap made me lose all creativity
of life and i soon saw God abandon my soul
i was alone with my mom and only her to console
she saw us through hard times and no times
and sometimes she even saw us through Satanic rhymes
the kind you only find buried in your mind
the kind poetry can hide and only it can find
i thought my life was over this year i stare into a glock
not of any man or naturic kind but that of a cop
he had it steady in his palm and his voice was not so calm
the last time i ever lived was that against my fathers palm
i dont needa be in i juss wanted 2 try out but it would mean alot 2 me if i was
I was tryna battle Corleone but he logged off, but yea, thanx bebe girl. whenever u get a chance it would be appreciated, those sigs are hot.
yo, i'm checkin fo that TNL battle...
k so i got chewy and unxtatic so far need 1 more for this TNL battle
I'm Gonna Make A Crew To Battle Yours, And Call It
Define Fiction!
Then, Monkeys Will Soar In The Sky And Rain Poop Upon Your Pitiful Little Squad, And Hippo's Will Charge You Down And Nibble A Bit On Your Nipples, While Ninja's Sing Horrid Haiku's And Your Females And Ravage The Bodies Of Your Little Boys!!! Roar!!!
looks like a good set up... intro i got aim so if u want you can im me at brukowski85 and young neo do you have aim or aol ?????
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Originally Posted by split
so i won't get agitated about ur ignorant rant..it was actually kinda funny...
and to tha joka..that wasn't a bad poem...nice emotion...but i don't think you're ready to be in quite yet...but keep writing man...you never know what may happen in the future
imma serial killer mudera material that'll eat you like cereal,
froot loops or cheerios, i got the whole breakfast crew,
bout to break loose, and show niggas how i flow,
i get dirty and grimey like the fungus underneath bin ladens toe,
i break bread like an unestablished ho on a coke flow,
let me in your crew cuz i got what it take,
i'll end up cookin niggaz like shrimp, potatoes, and steak,
most niggas recycle like eco friendly corporations,
there rhymes have no flow like british immigration,
but back to the point let me in and you'll have a win obligation
Bebegirl im bought to crash, but im for the tnl batttle when ever so holla at me tomorrow, goodnight
i dont know if tryouts r still up but ima drop some links and a verse to show im real thurough
*ahem*
these niggas undarate me, cuz im tha new guy...
only if they knew i blew rhymes since i was jus a lil guy...
try bout 5 or 6 lyrically nuthin but improvement....
then this internet came along n it basically ruined it...
on here flow dont count as much as tha punches...
but ive forced my way in n ive made my spot with above these runt kids...
otha rappas is scared of me offa what i write jus in tha cyphas...
cuz they neva see it comin then *BOOM* like a snipa...
they cant believe tha skinny dude wit da fro attacked wit venom lika vipa...
n have alla these rugrats shittin they diapas...
n aint i got time to babysit...
i want tha elite title...
so until in thrown i sit....
ima keep up tha fight ima reap-up-yo vitals...
n seep-out-yo life force..
blowin niggas frames like bulbs cant lose, i choose not too...
in fact it aint a choice its a must i flow...
cuz i got people who believe n need me i am the apostle....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...95#post1774095
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&page=2&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post1769634
1st link TOPICAL CYPHER 2nd link DISS THA CAT ABOVE U (im there more than once so keep yo eyes open) 3rd link DISS THA CAT ABOVE U (older n closed but im there)
i got my 3 battles in my sig in fact even if i dont make tha cut somebody vote on them got dam battles cuz they wont close like lil kims legs
yea so bruce is the designated poster....team one send ya verse to him and bruce don't forget to include the topic and mention that it's part one of our crew collab..
magic101 and teqnikaly speaking or however ya name is spelled...sorry but u two don't fit anymore...try again later....
WORD: u post in that sub-forum request thread n announce that we want a sub forum plus arrange a crew battle if u could cuz we need that to get a forum..aight?...pz
Word
wooooo let s do this shit im almost done wiht mine
mayne look when i posted it
they told me i didn't had enuff posts
i didn't care at this thread since i posted this 1
.........come on peeps...
click the link in my sig you fucking hoe.
thats cool. Wayne I got AIM so i'll send u my verse when i'm finished. ........... R we goin to set any type of time line to this..... When do yall want everybodies verses in??
text battle right here
i spit in front lines battle vs yungyosh
op2kal_illuzions do u have an alias? cause if u don't u need more post counts so we know ur more active so get battles set up and post counts up then try out again
tekniqalyspeakin i think u still need a lot of improvement and not sure how active u are we'll see wha the other guys say
Your Lines Are A Little Too Stretched Work On That>>and Then Come Back>>and Drop Me Some Lines
why are you ignoring me?
cause your a fuckin jew.............and ya wack.......and im not droppin in our battle..cuz....i never wanted to battle you anyways...but you wouldnt leave me the fuck alone..so i set it up..you dropped before i checked in...and thats the end of it..besides your a fag.......
ight im in another battle vs g twist and heres 14 line freestyle
theres been some beefin in the hood, sh*t is gettin 'wreckless'
cant even walk around at night n not be found 'headless'
but these rhymes are gunna keep comin, ima stay 'posessed'
spittin this hot sh*t like me will leave a nigga 'homeless'
decipherin my rhymes is like tryin to chew burnt meat
it'll just leave ya gums all black n start to hurt your teeth
now that we on the subject, u know my punches r aimin for u so guard your head
make yo teeth full of chips, loose teeth, n gaps they'll nickname them jagged edge
listen to me carefully homie, im tryin to imply
that im not the type of nigga...that u should try
i dont deal with chumps, but if u give me bread...
next time u see him u'll think his heads favorite color was red
try harder next time, cuz i got bigger fish on my plate
so carefully read these rhymes...n get this straight!
Drumroll please..... dumdudmdudmdum
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Might not be very good but I knocked it up in about 4 mins.
kk..that was alright...............nothin special..i think that you do have room for improvement.....i can see some talent..and i do think that you will get better...so...if tha return wants you in...your in..and i will train with you
you set the thread. . therefore you wanted to battle. . who cares whether you checked in? you made the thread so you were obviously planning on battling. . no. . it's not the end of it. . i'll give you 'til the weekend to write 10 lines or w/e an then i'm calling you out again an shaming you.Quote:
cause your a fuckin jew.............and ya wack.......and im not droppin in our battle..cuz....i never wanted to battle you anyways...but you wouldnt leave me the fuck alone..so i set it up..you dropped before i checked in...and thats the end of it..besides your a fag.......
i said you can be in or have any crews...im about to ban you again
wack ass crew name
aight...we appreciate your opinion, now git the fuck out faggot
K i'm gonna post in TNL for a call out I'm gonna make it 5 vs 5
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unxtatic
yung stunn
chewy
micnificant
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Pair A Dyce
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