well its like a Do the right thing type song. I was thinking like we can get a person who has made the wrong decisions in life and a person who is abput to go down that road. Do you get what i'm saying?
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well its like a Do the right thing type song. I was thinking like we can get a person who has made the wrong decisions in life and a person who is abput to go down that road. Do you get what i'm saying?
ima skinny guy but if pull out the nine i make nigga twice my size /flea/
n the way ill make tha shottie open ya body u think i had a doctors /degree/
i got the AK n tha Shottie beside me ready for /war/
n my block remind of a drug /store/
cause the fynes come get their needs /daily/
n i got niggas playing the corner like champ /bailey/
fucking wit a nigga like me ill leave u slump in the /trunk/
yall think i had asthma the way i carry the /pump/
im only 16 doves on the /coop/
n pot heads kno i keep the tree on me like a timberland /boot/
Yeh i think so. So u mean one of us rappin bout wat they've done wrong, and the other sayin that thats happened?Quote:
Originally Posted by DuvalRapStar
Sorry man, but ima lil confused. I kno wat ya mean by the topic.But i dont get how u wana do it. Can u plz explain how u wana spit it all, like wat i gotta do and wat u gotta do? if we do it...
If u cant get def's attention, its caus u on at different time to him. PM him a link of one of ur battles, a open mic or spit him sumthin. That way if u do that, he'll definately see it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Murda She Wrote
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Originally Posted by Knoxxious
Ok you know how those bums be on the street? We'll theres this kid who dosen't like the way life is going and he is like fuck the world. I quit everthing. And the bum is telling him not to. too keep on doing whatever he got to do, because he don't want the kid to end up like him.
Oh Ok, i get it now. Yeh im up for doin that. How will we structure it tho? We could have a verse each, or u say 4-6 lines or wateva then i reply bak at ya wit the same amount. So that way you get the feelin that the bum and the kid r talkin to each other.
Yeah.......Okay this gonna be sweat. Which one do you wanna be?
ummmmmmm, i dont really mind man, u choose who u wana be, and i'll be the other.
And an example of wat were doin is sorta like Eminem and Dr. Dre in guilty conscience.
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Originally Posted by Knoxxious
I'll be da kid(since i'm only 14) send me the verse when ever u get done.
Yo man, i thought we were doin it like Guilty consciece.
heres an example.
Im stuck on the streets alone, because of my past,
I shouldnt of sat on my lazy ass, smokin all that grass,
Dont follow my path son, or u'll end up stranded,
And thinkin bout your life, and how to end-it.
Then u go.......
then i go.......
then u......
then me......
then CHORUS....
THen u...
them me.....
etc etc.
Thats how i thought we were goin to do it. Do u wana do it that way?
here go my battle against other dood on a nother site...
i'm a magician DISSA, my flows just APPEAR/
u on da other hand, you're just shakin wit fear/
u talk a lot, but we see you're full of shyt/
"cummin" out ya' lips like a mouth full of dick/
pace ya'self on dis battle, don't lose ya' breath/
my punches hard and heavy, dey might bruise ya' chest/
after dis battle i'ma call out "Who is Next"/
u couldn't beat me if u used ya' best/
u like XBOX with no phone, u can't play LIVE/
but u can catch balls "one-handed" like 2K5/
if u can't take heat stay outta da kitchen/
cuz da tech'll leave half of ya' body parts missin/
u like a blazed English teacher, ya' verbs are high/
i shoot da eagle have u seein more birds den da sky/
battlin me is like rubbin da carpet wit "Magic Clean"/
u shook, and ya' kids'll be born wit static cling/
nigga get fly wit ya mouth, u rap and try and clown me/
but i'll cut ya 8 different ways like a batch of brownies/
i put ya' lips at my heel and make u kiss da street/
stick da barrel in ya' intestines, dats "Twisted Heat"/
DISSAPEARING ACT:
Your Drops-Are-Rated-Equal-To-Talent-Screams So You’ll Be 'Falling From The Center Of Attention' Like 'Intoxicated-People-On-Balance-Beams'...Chronic’ll Release-Four-Bundles-Of-Needs To Force 'Slurpee’s Through Your Skull To Your Wind Pipes' To 'Freeze-Your-Tunnel-Of-Dreams'..| {3}-all he said...
yo can i try out for krit
Yeah thats tight ummm....s that your first comment or whateva?Quote:
Originally Posted by Knoxxious
Ummm, If want it to be? Do u hav msn msg'er, if u do giv me ur addy...but if u dont have it i'll get yahoo.Is yahoo free?Quote:
Originally Posted by DuvalRapStar
so KRITIKAL wats good wit me joinin..?
Well I can't help but think that way
My teachers don't want me to succeed
On my report card I got mostly F's and D's
The teacher told me I was going to be a bum
she said I would be up on the corner beggin kids for change
And that I wasn't goin to pass the 8th grade
I looked right at her and said How in da hell you gonna tell a kid dat straight to their face
Bitch u need to be fired
U a teacher whos a discrace
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Originally Posted by Knoxxious
Yeah Yahoo is free that all I got
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Originally Posted by Young Bless
Yo u have to wait till def comes back, But ur more than likely to get in
Thats exactly wat i was gunna say. Yo man, Def by mouf's the one who decides in the crew or not.
Sure,ou be in here all the time.Quote:
Originally Posted by commonground
Stick with school tho, or in the future you'll regret it,Quote:
Originally Posted by DuvalRapStar
Say to yourself "try my hardest", and never forget it,
That teachers rite tho, i slacked off & became a bum,
Now days, strangers be passin me looks like im insain and dumb,
So raise ya thumb, & turn those bad thoughts into positives,
Caus one day you could be workin in air conditon offices.
:( am i not in thats no way to treat someone who could take your whole crew :(
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Originally Posted by Knoxxious
I don't think you get tha picture that i'm tryin paint here
You don't understand the determination and fear
Picture someone grown tellin u, u was loser
Picture them tellin you that would not have a future
But really makes me mad
Is that my mama said the same thing
She said you will never be shit
So you might as well call it quits
Man either tryout or get out.Quote:
Originally Posted by commonground
Then you spit sumthin again, then i reply. We should make a storyline for it at the start.
Here an example: One day a young boy gets sik of life and decides to run away. But as he gets tired he finds a secluded ally way to take a rest. As he sits down he begins to cry and starts yellin im "sik of life, y cant i succeed? No one will accept me...anf fuk school, i dont need a job to survive anyway".
Just somethin like that. wat u rekon?
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Originally Posted by Knoxxious
Yeah thats sweat, but the only problem is that i'm a girl. So just change boy to girl and we got it made.
k coo, ill rite another few lines to wat u just wrote.Quote:
Originally Posted by DuvalRapStar
Ok.
i'll make ya low.co and leave you wrong
dasdfmcksejgnfosknfadkojfo song
dowedk i'm doper then you sdfjoj bomb
esdfkorifoifjokwoekdopwkp my i'll song
most folks know tales well urs is lacking
between ya ta legs and sent ya packin
WOOT MY TRYOUTS ARE FIYAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Shit I can tell u right now u won't make it. Good bye.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165776
^^real tryout might as well see if i can get in then make a choice if i want in or not
Hey youngin i understand wat your sayin, and i still get told that,Quote:
Originally Posted by DuvalRapStar
Today a Father and son announced out loud im old crap,
Dont hold back, be brave ingone the fear, and i'll show that,
When u have a tough time, do the best to try and grow back.
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Originally Posted by Knoxxious
If u still get told those things then why are u here?
Just commit suicide and i'll meet u on da otha side(I'll kill myself to)
Cuz the way things are going I'll be next on the list
In the newspaper the Obituaries gonna read this
''The kid killed herself cuz she couldn't pass school who ever told her this is a fuckin fool''
Then the chorus I still got to make one up. So if u wanna get off go ahead. And i'll prolly post it tomorrow.
Nah i aint goin for a long time yet. Ill rite sumthin bak at that.
so wassup wit my tryout
Im still here tryin to prove to myself i aint a waste of space,Quote:
Originally Posted by DuvalRapStar
You should think of ppl thats doubted u, & aim to take there place,
Grab a gigantic eraser, and rub out your name from that list,
Caus if ya keep ur mind on track, ya wont hav to live of gat clips,
You see that dumpsta there? Thats my home car and bed room,
So show those techers sum knowledge, or u'll end up poor or dead, dude.
Yo, where should we put the chorus? or shouldnt we even have one? caus its really only a open mic. But ur the lasy so its up to u.
must i even spam these forums with another fuckin post
i elevated like a crippled at the mall but its this life i chose
so hand me the mic, see a legend, its true, I'll rock it
beefin me is like stickin ya dick in an open blender *also see.....bloody cock bits*
tryin out for kritical to leave kats in bitter condition
just more color for my sig a dirty politicians proposition
lol i dont know wtf i was thinking its too late for this shit
Drop a link from a battle or spit sumthin when Def by mouf is online so he can see it. He's the person that allows who's in the crew and who isnt.pz.Quote:
Originally Posted by bLaKgUy
Oh and man, ur name sounds like one of those horny lil kids that go into chat rooms to have cyber sex.no hatin, just speakin my mind.Lmfao.