iight you should use more vocabulary for you.
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iight you should use more vocabulary for you.
let me know what you think its my first rap
im a hard nosed basterd
hot like plastic
my style is masterd
hot like acid
i take mc's
i break mc's
but you your a fake mc
you look traumatised like you abused in the past
pick a toaster up and throw it in the bath
im the best mc in da north and south
tell your mum when she sucks to put her teeth in her mouth
werd...and make your lines longer....................use better vocab for sure..
v/ no...i mean, i guess it's not as bad as i've seen, but u need a lotta work...creativity, structure, everythin...keep elevatin...
nah nah...sorry dawg...try again later
^ Agreed.
unXtatic ~VS~ Fire a.k.a. Nikkelz
^there's my battle...hopefully it's gon be hotta than whateva she's got...
so give me some tips i want to battle someone but dont know how
thanks but how do i battle gainst people so i get experience
HOW BOUT YOU ALL GO FUCK YOURSELVES IF YOU DONT WANT TO BATTLE ME. :gfy: :thefinger
Damn the fucking crew mods are useless... shit even the end isn't doing his duty. I pmed 2 mods and the end and still no damn reply!!!
^ you would go to frontlines...then it should be a subforum that says Bitchslapped....just like you posted in here, you would make a thread and at the top in the white box just put the name of the person you want to battle....then in the bigger white box put some rules that you want the battle to go by...u know like the limit of barz, votes, etc.....if i didnt explain it right im sure there is other members in here that can sum it up better...lol...
Man I Told You How Already..chek My Crew Thread...corrupted Thugz
my verse against Phate iz dun, ill post da link wheneva he drops
go to Textual Territory...go to Front Lines...then go to Bitch Slapped...n call someone out...as soon as someone accepts your challenge, then set up battle...but dawg, that aint what we here fo, go to the Basics n git help there...u need to explore the site befo u come n post shit in the wrong places...
oh my god yo...u such a newb...go here:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=55
u gotta explore RB.com.....dont jus fuckin go to the first fuckin place u see n start postin shit
Thanks For All The Help
No Problem Dog............
I'm winning my battle in LLL Jr, the guys verse was sad, but hey it's a free win. It's all good people. My opponet in the crew battle still hasen't dropped, it's pissing me off.
:thumbup: Nice battle unXtatic
ok man sorry bout the mix up shit
word......thanks yoQuote:
Originally Posted by GaMeSTa
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YO IVE GOT A CREW I WANT TO MAKE SO IF ANY1 INTRESTED IN JOININ DROP A 10 LINE VERSE.
LATER KDOGG :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:
....dude You Cant Start A Crew Until You Got At Least 200 Posts..and You Have To Have Been Here For 3 Months Arleady......so You Cant Start A Crew Homie Sorry..
i will never lose againQuote:
Originally Posted by God
Yeah...your Best Bet..is To Email Credz...or B2k...but If Your Pm;n Mods To Ask For A Forum Then You Will Have To Pm The Forum Mod..which I Think Is Ambiguous
ok sorry
ok this crew needs a bit of lady's touch for organizing so that's what i'm here for! lol :) i think u guys had the potential to do well so just keep up all the good stuff and remain loyal and respectful of each other *hugs all*
ight timmy....i kinda know you but anywayz check thiz
Ya Only Go Toe 2 Toe When Ya Consealin Injectionz
Ya Layer of Skill HArder 2 Find Than Buried Murder Weaponz
Ya Don't Expect 2 b Served Like Pushin Shopping Kartz in Drive Thruz
Brainz On Technology An Ya Left Lightz Out Without a Blown Fuze
I'm Leavin YA More Late Than Suicide Bomberz Convertin
Cauze ya Handle Micz Like Stage Crewz an Remain Behind The Curtain
Ya Rize Passed Adversariez Like Parapalegicz Doin Hand-Standz
Elevate ya Mind More Twisted Than Levitation Into Ceiling Fanz
IT'z a Change of Pace Like Bein Taxed by Vending MAchinez
Murder Tapez Wit More Tragic Hitz Than Blockbuster Crime Scenez
It'z Worth a Thousand Wordz When Ya Takin Bigger Shotz Than Billboardz
Cauze When it Comez 2 Yo Pride I "Str8 Jack it" Without The Psychiatric Wardz.... (Straight Jacket)
i would kill you bitch made faggotQuote:
Originally Posted by MC Animal
this goes out to the Hit N Run crew who think they so tight
They might hit sum shit but they runnin out of sight
yo check it....muhfuckerz dont wanna get in a fight
got the bible in my left hand my gat in the right
dont fuck with my crew or i might just loose my mind
if ya want beef with us then make sure u do it right
they fuckin with tha street rydah , my lyrics are on fiya
tha time has come , we real solja's & we ready to die nah
aint affraid to put sum wholes in fake bitches
cut sum marks on ya face's now go get ya sum stitches
this only a small part that i could do to muhfuckerz i hate
next is a drive by , rollin down in my truck i aint gonna hestitate
get into fights and buckin macks all day is the way i regulate
don't say your the best muhfuckerz i bust sum in your chests
wouldn't walk on srteets nomore without wearin cevlar vests
hit N run the reallest fagget muhfuckaz
We always respectful too each other.
Aint we, hoecakes?
lol J/P witchall...
Im out till da 28th yo. Bebegrl be the one to holla at if u need anything. Stay up fellas, good luck with ya battles and lets get shit crackin! Nah mean?
Peace out guys. :thumbup:
peace out Woog, enjoy ya vacation bruh
Peace, have fun
^Was that a tryout man? cos rabe and sick already said that youre in. And when are these crew battles?
when my battles clear .....not much is happening on them ....i go up emm...get some votes when its cleared i will battle.....
My Last Diss
That proves, I'm at least decent. If you wanna be down with Woot-Set, drop a nizzame. Ya dig?
Open Mic Verse I Guess Its Called An Artist's Depression
Check It
No oppurtunity in my proximity suffering for and eternity
Fate is kicking me denying me my own oppitamy
You must be shittin me been years society still aint forgiven me
So I stay hidden see, no one knows wats deep within me....
Thunderheads on forecast I remain an outcast
Life is so fast yet I still cant last holdin onto the past
No hands ever extend I remain resented
It seems I cant except wat my cards presented
This future relented im fearing my own outcome
Cas I've been strivin but always end up outrun
My day is done with nothing accomplished
Pride abolished esteem demolished
My garden dstroyed no place to frollick
Sorrounded by kids who love to talk shit
There aint nothin to look up to and I'm down on the ground
So I dont have a clue where to run to when the gun sounds
The sun is shinin but it aint absorbed by my roots
And if I'm not properly nourished how can I produce my fruits
Remain obsolete face to the concrete
Only way im back on my feet is when feelin a beat
Riding a poetic wave that flies through my brain
Chane of carrers impossible cas i cant retain
This insane flow that just beats in my pen
Synchronizin in my heart allowing me ot ascend
To a place where im respected and my skills reflected
That chamber in this brain where not a word is neglected
Pen and paper my only stationary sanctuary and where i reside my light
Though i may appear a nothing who wont become nothing inside im right
pz
not a try out mayne
ami seriously mildly retarded or do ppl just not care about witt.......and punches anymore...check out my battle i think i crushed him....he set up his punches aight but neva followed through.......and his wordplay was awfull
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150546
am i retarded or am i just gettin shit for votes