Bet but you have until 2/18 to post. @Viral
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Bet but you have until 2/18 to post. @Viral
Oh good lol
Dropped. Looking forward to seeing how it turns out.
That'll be a good one
Fucka poem.
In soviet Russia poem fucks you.
@VitaL ...thanks for the early voting. I wasn't expecting to see one so soon.
I'm gonna go back and check the syllable count. I basically wrote the whole verse in one sitting on my phone so after a while I had to fight through a lot of mental fatigue. LoL.
Glad you liked it tho man. Thanks again for voting and the feedback.
For sure, the syllable count only falls short a syllable or two and it's only in a handful of bars. So it's not even really worth pointing out unless you're being picky lol. I enjoyed it though. Definitely a fresher concept to see.
Word man. Appreciate that.
Hit me up if you're ever interested in a collab man. Also, if you can check out my OM The Rain that'd be awesome too.
Yeah...no problem. I'll check out for sure. But let me hit you with some feed on it in a few hours because right now it's like 2 a.m. and I need to hit the bed. But I got you later.
Sounds good man.
@143 @TheIllyricist I'm not no showing. Still have to finish up my drop. But I'll have it up by tonight.
ok I will give you till midnight 2/28Quote:
Originally Posted by Nahlidge
Damn, if that's the case I have plenty of time. lol jkQuote:
Originally Posted by 143
lol all good. Lookin' forward to the read
@Sammy why the sign out?
@Viral oh i just recently sign onto another league. two leagues would be hard to maintain for me lol so i had to make a choice. But yo i hope u don't think im signing out cause i'm salty, man,u gave an honest feedback which is cool. Plus @SELF ACTIVATE is my bro so still all in the fam ha.
I can respect that. This is the only league I'm in and unless there's a topical tourney here I don't plan on over burdening myself with more lol. Was just making sure you weren't offended by my vote or the votes in general. Part of losing is learning from your mistakes. Or maybe you didn't make any mistakes and it was just the personal preference of those who voted. Many factors come with battling. Glad to see you're cool though. I respect that and hope to see you return.
:givesaf:
You're not very productive . Talking shit in a league you have no affiliation with.
I think he just needs a hug. Mommy and Daddy aren't paying enough attention is my guess.
Someone definitely pissed in his Cheerios.
lol kid sick, ss is graced by your presence.Quote:
Originally Posted by kid sick,
but why don't you join?
go on.
join.
....go on.
.....join.
I forgot you poetry people are emotional and can't take jokes. I'm sorry.
Hi, Emily.
:love:
on behalf of all poets, we accept your apology : )Quote:
Originally Posted by kid sick,
and....invite you to join SS lol
Brain wash the young chap
SS is too long for me.. I can write 16 lines or so. But these 64 line pieces you guys like writing is no bueno.Quote:
Originally Posted by Emily
Sixty four is ridiculous unless you know how to keep someone's attention that long or you've got some crazy as fuck concept.
56? 40?
All too long.
I'm not trying to write that long b.
The most I'll go is around 30-40 unless it's a champ match and I feel the story needs to be longer. I can go from Disney to Martin Scorsese real quick.
Interesting...my opponent wont show probably. I'll still try to vote on some battles later before the day escapes.
Yeah...me too
I'll be back with thoughts and votes a little later
Just droppped mine. Thank you @Judge Mentill for the understanding, have some real serious shit going on with my daughters but I was able to drop still. Great verse too man I really dug it!
Going to vote on some battles later today.
No prob bud. Real life shit has to trump stuff like this. Besides, it's my first match in the league, a no show would be anticlimatic. Nice verse too man. I'd rather start against one of the stronger writers in the league anyway :)
Aren't you sweet.
Dog this isn't a place where you can troll. Either battle or bounce. @kid sick,
I'm the most active poster in this thread. Lolz.
and the site