Picture Perfect

wow mna your pretty dope im feelin this...nice usage of vocab and structure is great...keep it up fam i liked the writer the best!

thanks my dude....ok now ill RTF on your piece.

omega

liked your verse the flow was good, the multies were good, i liked the imagery and content.
i think that your flow started off good, but to the end it kind of got a little worse, but still good.

i liked your first 4 lines of the verse, i thought they were a good way to start the verse off.


Johhny 6 Feet

Beads of sweat dripped from his forehead, the brush stung with splinters
The man, bent on his task, through half a dozen winters

^i liked these lines the best out of your verse.

another good verse, high standard your closer was good as well, imagery, flow, vocab were all spot on and a good overalll verse.



Kaotic theory

again since omega set the standard with the first verse i think that you kept up with it, your flow was good again though i thought it dropped a little at the end, your lines were a little longer than at the start of the verse. also you had some lines which flowed great

its my passion, perfect pictures is where I’m living though
creating wicked vivid visuals, of fond individuals

the first line i thought let down you second line, i liked the flow in it.

i liked the imagery you created here was very poetic.


all the verses in this piece went together very well when i was scrolling back up to choose a quoteable or look back i was looking at the wrong verse a few times. You all showed a connection here and it was one of the best OM's i've read in a while.

thanks my dude much appreciated man.

alotta love here thanks.

yea alot of love yet not noticed but its koo!...

Nice piece, filled with quality...I enjoyed it thoroughly. and btw I just came back to read it again, and leave a bit more feed. =/

That and I fucked up and accidentally posted a link.
Keep dropping Omega. :2thumb:

how do you accidently leave a link?

Images play, in fascination of existence
Words appear in great depth of definition that’s persistent.
Troubled times recorded, struggled times explained
Future starts to unfold, with a figure four of tenacious pain.
Tears fall slow, like the ink from my pen
World of destruction tour begins in the count from 1 to 10.
^best lines in ur verse...

But artists persevere and create visual prophesies
Inspiration to create inspiration, crush literal mockeries
Beads of sweat dripped from his forehead, the brush stung with splinters
The man, bent on his task, through half a dozen winters
^ best in urs

this life has no hustles, living healthy is the ultimate drug
its never ending, no off buttons, batteries, or plugs
every angle of this world is pronounced love, and dedication
reaching for the stars on every try of each attempt, without hesitation
^best in urs

well i like how yall brought three diffrent veiw points to the table...all were deep and had very strong visuls...but all came hard...good vocab..liked the story line...all verses hade there own great peices to them...no one person came garbage...this was a very good read...allmost a perfect peice...:)

RTF on disbanded angels...

woot man now im off to leave feed

Aside from the D/R comments . I was feelin Omegas verse straight up . I didnt get into the other two as much . They had rhyme scheme . As for meaning and imagery , it didnt connect with me .

Yo

lmfao DR comments whoa iight i guess......

wow i hope i wasent a dr comment lol...check my om in sig erbody...another ones comin to whats love feat dj. waitin for it to get posted

really nice....flow was on point thru out this whole drop....i was feelin the emotion in this the most...you all made your verses come together really well..and yet the flow was on poiint...the mutlies were dope....this was a deep drop keep up.leave feed on the freepost u jus did omega

one thing I disliked was your structure, wrecked the read for me cunt :cussing;
apart from that i felt you really stepped your shit up on this one. Vocab came through nice, original concept was used good. I liked this.

thank you!.....lmfao...woot!

hey omega....armageddon....peep it....

well people thanks for all the feed...appreciate it!