i really liked this. i actually saw what you were talking about as i read it. nice imagry. your wordplay was nice, your flow was decent, your structure was good. great job mc, stay up.
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i really liked this. i actually saw what you were talking about as i read it. nice imagry. your wordplay was nice, your flow was decent, your structure was good. great job mc, stay up.
^^ u av just copied pasted that u loser u havent even left ur own feed i think thats biting?
i liked the emotion and creativity in this peice you got potential my fav bars where the 1st 3 bars :P good job homie
*leave feed on perspectiv of a soldier plz*
thanx for feed(syntext, dap , moe) appriciate it......uppin.......
let this die please ima do another thanx for all the feed appriciate it...
it was a great piece, i loved it....but dude....relax on the uppin....
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