ok another gay response ^.i specifically said for no one with no amount of experience to leave any type of feed in here.
no bullshyt freeposting either.thank you
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ok another gay response ^.i specifically said for no one with no amount of experience to leave any type of feed in here.
no bullshyt freeposting either.thank you
This peice was ok you know.? Nothing that was to great. The structre was off a tad bit. And the wordpaly was lil young. the plot was nice and the flow was incredible. 6-10 peice. Keep it up.
aight thanx for the honesty^.uppin
feedback,please n thank you
This piece was written to perfection....It flowed well vocab was cool but could've used a few differnt words instead of the same rhyme scheme but it all came together at the end. I felt where you were coming from visualing a ladies point of view on male judgement and I have to say you did't do that bad capturing the male point of view..
Overall this was a good piece for the readers ear....Keep Up the HOT DROPS...
____________________ELEVATIOn________is the KEY!!
aight thanx for the feed.would gladly appreciate more
Meh I liked it for the most part. The clothing line was best to me. Statements always impress me. But overall this was good nice and lengthy. Word keep goin.