God is a Gangster

last up of the day n im out

leave yo links n ill check yo joint

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well this was pretty good i liked tha topic which u stayed on all out tha om it had times where tha flow was off but u made up for that with real nice wordplay and u dont see to many pieces like this

7/10

really cool and creative topic/title i liked it
this peice was really god...flow was very smooth and nicely done
strucutre was excellent wicked even also nicely done
rjhymes were good..nice multies too....
overall this was good..keep it up..peace-

topic was nice, lryically one of the best tracks i heard in the while, it was dope ya me i liked that line

"Cash controls the nation; vagrants are classified as useless eaters,
Cold orphans seek salvation; the weak are beaten by ruthless cheaters"

that was tight stay up

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Possibly THE most creative thing on the board right now. The flow hurt it a little, but the concept was dope. Had me laughing right the way through,

Nice job bro. Keep 'em coming.

safe bro
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yeah i'm more like a free styler when it comes to flow i guess..

Hmmm. . *notes you said safe* You british?

Hey, leave some feedback on mine yeah? Lol -

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=275546

Brit

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London

I'm british too. Black Country boy. .

cool


upz

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cough.....................
uppin some more sales..

that was nice... God is a gangster its type different

thats what it is

upz

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Wasnt really feeling this bro.Add a bit more emotion and a bit more creativity.You had a few good lines in there and some show some good possitive.No hate bro and keep it up ;)

well your the first person that doesnt like it.. and it would be virtualy impossible for me to put any more emotion or creativity into it.. did you actualy read it and understand it.. i dont reckon you did.. just posted a few lines to use this as a link for your OM

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Ok i'd say about one dope person posted in here the ret are all noweights bro.Listen thats my opinion if you want me to go into greater detail I will

well that shows how small minded u are judging people by their post count

you have no advice for me kid.. your really not all that.. you dont like it fair enuff..w/e..cant please ery1 and dont even try to please no one but me in fact

you had no sensible critisismm.. you just just shout the same shit at most verse u read.. n u aint all that

really good i liked the whole thing i cant even explain it its crazy maaan u got it for sure u talented

haha w/e man.I just asked you do ya want me to break it down for you but you too thick to understand that.Bro believe me I would kill you in a battle.You think ya can beat me then plz step up

if you was gonna break anything down or if u had the capability to do so.. you would have done already.. go fuck yourself.. like i said u dont like it w'e.. everybody else that ever read it on any site loves it..
i dont like your shit either.. prolly never will
i dont like 50 cent.. i dont like game... i dont like nelly.. so the fuck what tho.. i just dont listen to their shit then do i

now stop freeposting in my thread.. and let the rest of the board enjoy my dopetastical writin

^^^now he is ducking me.The bitch thinks he dope well m8 ya nuthen but a pussy and wtf sayen you dont listen to 50 nd shit man u a lil bitch so ima leave it here

and this bitch says I give shit feed

meh i diddnt like this at all..topic was blah, vocab was basic as kindergarten..flow=chop chop


meh

thats what he posted on a OM

HERB!!!

yeah right.. and that reply was in response to your reply dumbo.. i guess you forgot about that already tho since your so thick.. and wont let up on this freeposting thing will ytou

i guess since u rate members with high posts so much your out to get yours up so u can claim u a vet

good luck neways with your bullshit

ill ignore you completely from now on.. and ignore all your battles and om;s yeah..
hope your satisfied now.. more enemies the merrier i guess

this piece was good.......
.....i love the topic, when i was scrolling down OM, this caught my eye, most definitly. i like how you stukc to the topic, it also show some nice imagry" i could vision it while i was reading it. the flow was str8, but not the best, but the structure, was clear to read, with an amazing concept.the vocab was flawless as well.....it was an intresting piece, nicely wrote.....9.2/10

word^.......peep my pieces down in the sig....

safe 4 da look out G notes

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Dude, this has had enough feedback already. Over 50 replies is enough for anybody.
Closed.