this joint wasnt bad, the beat is nice, lyrics is iight, flow is iight too, keep up the creativity
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this joint wasnt bad, the beat is nice, lyrics is iight, flow is iight too, keep up the creativity
yeh tight
nice lyrics...nice beats...nice delivery...overall a nice song.
sal-v has sum dope shit onhius soundclikc,... this is nice flow as always.. delivery is sex... and beat choice is nice... not keen on ur voice but im u.k only used to hearing mainstream voices in u.s. just keep doing ur thing... u/ve come back niceform ur writers block feeling others to
You vocals sound kinda low is the first thing i notice. damn this is super duper deep for something you wrote while bored. The flow on the chorus is like, ehhhhhness. there were a few pauses in there I didnt really like in their place. beat is coo and anyhting I didnt mention was good. keep it up
listenin...
...decent flow, nice lyrics, emotion is there, the beat fits the song perfectly, the chorus is iight,...this is definitly a hott song
lyrically this is coo and concept is strong..
but i just can't get over the net-flow you got...
i think i tell you that everytime i listen to your music..
beat is epic..
but yeah... the flow,just not my steez my man..
keep spitting..
shit was kool.feelin da beat,feelin the topic as well,good drop
keep grindin...
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heard a few of your tracks, you got a raw style, stay up
thanks for replies.
fuck the rest of you bitch ass niggas :mad:
beats hot, i dont liek ure voice, so many people sound exactly liek this..i unno..
lyrics r coo,
flows hot, on pretty much whole time.
deliverys hot
emotions str8.
hot track, nothing u can do about this but i dont liek ure voice, some ppl will some wont..thats my opinion..but other then that..
hot track. keep ya shit up!
Youre the first person that has told me I have a voice similar to alot of people. The only other people I get compared to really are DZK and Reef. Nonetheless, thank you for the honesty, man.
-Sal
nice beat....sounds like sumtin jay-z will spit to as an intro to his album....ur voice sounds very rugged, and clear.....hook was definitely on point.....definitely could relate to this song, especially with the hook....i like tracks like this....this is hip hop at it's best...definitely a track worth listening....stay up
sal-v, you did it again man..you get doper everytime i hear you, songs on some deep shit..nice imagaries..voice doesnt sound so rough, i like it hah
dope beat
love the emotion..
good emphasis on certain words..
great imagery...didnt like ya ''ahhh''..lol..to unexpected
dope shit sal-v, as usual...
keep it up brotha.
Iight, this track is straight SICK. Kind of reminds me a little bit like Gravediggaz - Unexplained track. I could really get into the Hook. Good flow good delivery. I'm def gonna download this. Stay up.
lol @ brand new unheard old shit... ok vox kicked
blah blah blah, emo rap.. this is on ur normal steez, which is good, like classified, nothing makin me say holy shit or anything, u always sound the same.. flow an' all that are on point tho, i guess the lyx are kinda deep, but i could care less bout your problems, so it really ain't for me..
peace
^Youre missing the message if you think I'm talking about my problems.
Thanks for feed.
already listened to this, just now gettin to leavin feed though.....
beat is dope, very emotional track, lyrics are sick
ya voice and delivery fits the beat so nicely
the hook is fuckin fiya, seriously
flows on point, yea this track is almost flawless.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=266196
^^^leave me some feed on that if you can, thanx
ill hit you backa fter work
i l0ve y0ur v0ice and it g0es erfefctly with the beat and y0ur fl0w is 0n p0int.
i wanna find a g0od heaven but it hurts like hell - h0t verse
perfectly* w0w lolQuote:
Originally Posted by Sh0rTy_s0_Pr0Pa
I heard this before. I don't know why I didn't reply. I love the chorus though. Energy is dope. This is nice shit.
this beat is seeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxyyyyyyyy. you came on this shit really dope. chorus is on some deep shit. nice track man.
*dl's it*
like the hook.... the beats tite.....flows on point throughout no flaws.....
overall this a nice piece.......
ma 2 pennys.........
so is it wrong that i praise...those i see? or a god that i meet when i go to sleep
^dope.
walk to heaven back again, not the devils advocate
WHOA. Lyrics are so dope so far.
oh ok, so that "is it wrong that i praisE" was the chorus...didnt realize that til second time around. It was very emotiona, liked it a lot. When u said only work for a man whos hands are black..i was like, that was kinda out of nowhere? Then u paused and brought upthe blood,sweat, part. Tight.
Presence, delivery, emotion and all that good stuff, were all on point, not much to complain about. Peace.
the hook is butta, i like this trak, ur not bad at all, i likes...
You can rap - that's for sure. Honestly - ur music isn't for me - but I can understand why people like it. So basically, your good, just not my preferred choice. Keep grindin fam.
shits hot man...your delivery and flow are real nice, mic presence is nice, lyrics are sick....overall shit was real nice. Ill be lookin for more from you
~J High~
listenin ..... beats tight work .....youre voice is easy to listen to ..... flow was on point not really much to critique pretty dope song I was feelin it jus didnt like the hook alot get at me Pz
-Kamikaze
wussup man.. well yeah jst heard it (no duh) lol.. dont really listen to ppl's music but glad i did this time.. this song was all on point.. delivery, lyrics, and flow.. the quality should be alittle upped.. or maybes its my speakers lol... well i guess all i can say for first impression for me is that make more songs! MORE MORE MORE!! LOL
yeah....
first of all the beat is fuckin' huge
i liked ya voice a lot
ill song man
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listening....
beat is nice...no offense...but u kinda remind me of a large percentage of white net rappers....kinda like a dzk voice/flow......its not a bad thing...
lyrically this is nice....im really feelin it....hook is pretty nice...
overall this is a nice song man...keep it up
dopest track i've heard from you yet..
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im feelin the beat...it sounds kind of like the anthem type. flow was coo as usual, thats not really surprising. quality was coo...you must have a studio or somethin lucky bastard. lyrics were aiight...they were the type that start to make you think about life n shit while you listen. it was a deep track but for some reason i decided not to download it....i didnt like the chorus as much as the verses. overall it was pretty cool.