Making your name off the fat of the land, prep' to be cursed bitch
coz I can see the REAL D.Zaster, man.. written in your verses.
(decent opener)
Your simply mediocre, a joker, your bad. But on a lighter note:
D' being made mod' outshines anything he EVER wrote
(ok, but not hard hitting)
D.Zaster started a shitty Empire crew, & failed before I doubted shit
then you created a crew with Meters.. & he doesn't even know about it
(no not really feeling this)
Peeps got shit to prove, a whole gang got my back if I need
Thats why D.Zasters the first person I'd choose..
to be booted from the league.
(ok, but once again not hard enough)
Zasters a fag, a fake.. stampin' his face quicker than he can no-show
shit..I been on top of this battle so long, bitch has gave me vertigo.
(nice punch)
Canz knows me & he'll probably feed, keeping his ear to the ground
& he's known to always put-up a fight.. ,
after taking SO many put downs.
(lol, kool punch and well worded)
I kick Canz to death cuz its something I enjoy when in the zone
but when Canz kicks Canz. . he's moving part of his home.
(nice concept but once again not hard enough)
D.. you will be forgotten about, man. I only speak to the truth, cuz
your status will lower quicker than a handicap bus
(meh, not bad but need a better closer)
vs.
Your always comin played, I guess crews just arnt for you
Cos you aint original... No matter how much you beg to join that crew
(nice opener, good personal)
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Youve never been dope, While I stay smashing the hits
Yall can call me a demonstration worker the way Ill be smashin brix
(decent concept but not feelin this)
Your not elite, I mean just look at this cunts lines
Cos when I say we`re at war... I mean your just stuck in the front lines
(nice)
This fag lies, Says Meters aint know about the crew, Listen mayne
Tell me this..
If he aint know about it how the fuck did he come up with the crew name?
(no)
This flows insane and yer I fed, But hey who gives a fuck
When I mention the key to success... fag got his lips ready to actually suck
(lol yeah, kool punch)
Ill hurt you quick, And smack ya to remove that frown son
Cos when I wish you well... I actually wanna throw you down one
(well worded and good punch)
Your ugly as fuck kid, Id rather be seeing your mom in a thong
See...
having hair on your chest aint the only resemblence you have to king kong
(kinda funny but weak punch)
Your wack as fuck, Now sit back as this verse nails ya
atleast You got a good family tree.. But thats only cos the crops a failure
(played and needed a stronger closer)
Overall....Thus was a good battle but you both came nice but at sometimes needed more consistency, trahedy you had some good concepts in there man but never exucuted your punches right and the wording let you down....D....You had some good punches but could of been more consistent, some good concept and wordplay and you was funnier than him, where as tradey was more cheesy, anyway this was a real close battle, but D gets it for more consistent punches that hit just a bit harder.
V/D
