Uppin this Work of art...Piece <<< :rolleyes:
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Uppin this Work of art...Piece <<< :rolleyes:
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bored yall..so i thought id up this one last time...checkz it
all i can say DOPE!!!!!!!! flow was incredibley smooth and strucuture is very good as well.... rhymes were very good and complex........topic was interesting and very creative...nicely done by all fo you....multies were good..great drop...real dope..overall 10/10..keep it up all of you...peace,and return the feed on my Om collab part 2 fet lyric striekr and freestyle king..thanks
thanks for the feedback
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is it me or is this the 4th dope piece iv'e saw today?
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uppin over these wack pieces
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shit was very dope.......vocab was on point....u all blended it 2gether nicely ta give it dat diary type feel and......damn.........im at a loss 4 wordz.....i'll never look at my diary the same again.........madd props and respect 2 all yall and vamp really shocked me! now i kno dat wen he talk all hiz shit ta everyone.....he can actually back it up.........lol........naw im playin but that shit was really really dope....keep it up yall
well you got reported fool hahaQuote:
Originally Posted by Inner Sandman
thanks for the feedbackQuote:
Originally Posted by killamami1
^^lmao sandman...um thanx i guess, but thats not necessary...they are all dope!...real dope!
but it a compliment boyz lmao...ill take it..( but i dont respect it lol )
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Ayo this was str8 man good collab everyone held it down keep postin and feed on my OM
Lol U shoulda know dis from the start...Good looks though Mami...Quote:
Originally Posted by killamami1
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Was hot, everyone came out doing good nice vocab and wordplay, only thing I would say is that you should make everyones structure together you know
Then it wouldnt be individual....No dopeness..everyone writes their own way homie
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i have to say this piece really inpressed me
i felt all the pieces you guys brought to the table making it just that much better about diffrent emotions in a diray. Just switching from point to point of a matter of seconds just had my jaw drop i am really meaning that. i really havent read much of you guys pieces before but i will keep a look out. very creative in each in every verse havnt seen anything like this before props to you all stay up and keep writing guys
thanks for the feedback
yup!..appreciate all the good feedback!!
i dont kno how many times i have 2 COUGH! lol but damn H-O-F lmao...j/p w/e....
keep the feedcomin...
(we will have 2 do this again sometime..in the future)
Thanks Tim...Thanks Mami, Love this feedback...we MUST be dope...Don't forget to leave links and I'll look at your work and tip/give good feed on your pieces...Peace~
Uppin Again~
~NaSh
^^what he said just drop a link...
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this was real tight man u explain every single detail people needed to know. good concept.nice structure. u keep writing better and beeter man keep it up
9/10
sweet dis sounds awsome [img]
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yea that shit was hot, i was feelin everything about it
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Uppin............................................. ...Lets leave links after you feed?
Thanx for feedback tim :love:
sick of all these wack THREADS, being viewd above this...SIGHS.....herbz..wat ya gonna do!!!
neways
rize over these piss poor OMS above us.....like it should be...and technically has been!!
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*dopest member of this OM* :o...lol jp..My fellow writers be dope yo!!
This was just pure dope as hell, each verse written by each person was emotional and complex but with great understanding... the imagery in all verses was really great and the collab as a whole was basically perfect. The beggining verse kept me reading, the flow was untouched and descriptive words were really great to see. Each person did their independant thing and althought it was a very long read, it was more then worth seeing the views and opinions on what you had to say.
There would be too many lines in here if i had to quote my favs, so ima cut it shorter coz u seen then b4 neways ^^^^
Overall on this read, i'd say 10/10... i had no problems with anything at all, structure was gr8, and multi's were perfect, no lines were written in there for the hell of it... each line meant sumthin and thats what made it so good, the time taken to make this was obviously present, and it was worth every bit of it. I loved this read, was a straight dope drop! Props to all, coz ya all took this out on a well worked on piece...
If you could leave some feed back on my OM that would be very appreciated...
just hit " I'm sorry " in my sig, thanx
thanks for the feedback
Thanx legacy for the great feedback..it is very much appreciated!
**i will hit up your OM when i get home*
bells about 2 ring...blah
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thanxa
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