Yo if anybody minds can u leave a
1) overall rating 1-10
2) Flow rating 1-10
3) word play rating 1-10
4) structure rating 1-10
5) critizism and or comments
thx this is to help my book
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Yo if anybody minds can u leave a
1) overall rating 1-10
2) Flow rating 1-10
3) word play rating 1-10
4) structure rating 1-10
5) critizism and or comments
thx this is to help my book
up.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=237533
hit that up
you need to elevate and get rid of the "/" they make you look like a noob
flow and message was the only really thing decent about this piece
noi multies,vocab, bad structure........ go see the elevation forum
sorry
Lol this was wen i had 100 posts but thx i need a rating on the shit tho
by the way i can't vote on ure shit pharoah i only got 300 posts
5/10
Now Go Peep: A Night To Remember
gotcha
I like this it was a decent topic and although not too complex it was easy to understand. I'd suggest you build up your vocab and try and use more multi's. I just think they make things flow easier when you read, but thats just my own opinion.
Yah thats exactly what ime including in my REMIX, but ime looking for some1 to feature in it...sum1 with a good rep