When The Sky Falls

wow. i mean im speechless.................. that shit was nice it was deep and all that shit. i really liked it. holla back at ya girl for that collab fam

thnks for the replies...and i really appreciate the nomination for HoF...thisll be my first piece to get nominated for HoF...all though it wont get in the HoF...its nice to see my piece actualy nominated for HoF...thnks..and im still down for tha collab boo....i dropped my SSjr verse..so im waitin on Kontext to drop.1~

yo that was real. u just killed it tha whole way thru. i loved how complex ur rhymes were and it all flowed perfectly, check out my open mic FOR MY BOO holla back

This piece gets thumbs-up from me. A good topic with fluid multis and strong vocab to bring it to life. The imagery was al ittle hazy in places, but shockingly sharp in others. A decent length too. A word of warning though: dont overuse multi's if it means sacrifcing making sense to do it. You've definatley got talent as a writer, not its all about the little details. I'll be checking for more of your stuff.

Keep posting, thanks for the reps.

Damn man.. this was a very good piece rite here.. much much much much much props lol.. the structure was good but struct. dont matter.. its more of flow.. the flow was good also.. everything was jst perfect.. iono wut to tell u to elevate.. jst keep writting hommie..

When i first saw the verse i was like oh god not another person who cant set ou tthere rhymes properly but once i started reading i see you know very well how to set them out.
You had some fucking iLL Vocab in this verse, i didnt think you'd have multies but then you blew me away with them:|. I'm Really Impressd With Your Multies! And Exstensive Use Of Vocab With Out Going Over The Top You Set A Picture In My Head Looking Forward To Seeing More Of Your Work!

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Terror In The Streets
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Thanks For The Good Piece To Read

PaRa

word..thnks.

up.

up..last time