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uppin this shit
This piece was pretty dope.You had a good Storyline to go with the topic.But I think you could have went deeper into the topic in my opinion.But you had good Imagry cuz when I read this I could picture in my head what was oin on in this piec.You had a good structure and good use of vocabulary too.But overall this was a dope piece.Keep up the good work.Hope to see more from you soon.Keep on writing.
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