nice flow, simplistic lyrics but the syllable combining is hot and punches are ok.
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nice flow, simplistic lyrics but the syllable combining is hot and punches are ok.
Yeah I liked this song, it was pretty cool.
I was never really fond of this beat...
Im Feeling this joint tho...Nice Flow...The Lyrics is straight...Delivery is Nice...This sound like something i would hear on a mixtape...Quality is nice to...Overall i think this was a decent track...keep it up homie...
Hit Me Up...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=180748
iight yo did ok i aint hatin but i can tell that you just "made a bunch rhymes that you've never done or seen"have you ever sold drugs have you ever shot a gun(@ some one) have you ever been a vip have you ever did anything you said in your freestyle No!!! so why lie about stuff and say you done it lmao studio gangstas i tell you good drop the lyrics and beat was cool
edit: i have nothing to prove to you, not EVERYTHING i say is truth, i dont think you could name a rapper i couldnt find lies about, but considering you dont know me its funny you make that assumption. majority of the shits true, its all linked somewhere and i expand on it, thats entertainment, but the basis for most all i say is real, in deep songs especially.
da beat is nice as hell, da first verse is nice i like da flow and dat b.i.g line,
nice 32 bars i c ma self bumping dis, u should turn dis to a party song
this tracks sick..i was gonna download it n rip it..but that shit neva turns out the way u want it to..maby thas jus me..when i let people do it..lol...it was a sick beat..n lyrics were sick also....good work a. im glad to see u back to....
return the fav on my goodbye track if u can...
hit me up at MumblesDotNet if u wanna collab some time..good work..
Sum nice shit man....
for real...the flow was really nice.
U gotta nice style.....
Pretty solid lyrics as well....
Props....nice....Keep it up-1
One of the nicer songs I've heard this month, but not the best. Your flow was on point, but your lyrical content seemed to degrade from your opening lines. Keep up the good work, and nice on one the beat, you used a rakim beat and didn't turn the song into complete trash.
the beat is aiight, flow was on point, delivery was pretty good, lyrics were aiight...i liked some of the lines but i heard a bunch of played concepts, it sounded like the typical commercial rapper....which is not bad at all for a netcee, but i would like to see more creativity in your lines. BUT overall it was a pretty enjoyable to listen to and i will be on the look out for the finished version
so im like the "typical" commercial rapper, which we all know you mean NYC rapper, yet thats like the average netcee? your on different ends of the spectrum homie
im not a "netcee" whatever you determine that to be
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Originally Posted by A. React
is it just me or did you rhyme your reply back to him?
damn.. i was really feelin this man.. flow was point.. lyrics were on point.. i felt liek ya lyrics were real polished man.. you nice.. was feelin it for real.. stay doin you man.. keep droppin.. if u ever pop ou ta mixtape, i'd buy it fa sho..
shit is distorted as hell...
switch ya flow up more often....ya delivery's cool...
but jus switch the flow up more..
beat's aight. i liked the origional beat more...this one is chopped up an switched, i dunno why but some one fucked wit the trumpets. and added effects..lol
if no one's heard the beat... Rakim - Guess Who's Back
coo shit, ur pretty decent. keep that up.