Jay-Rell vs. Snikerz

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Originally Posted by Jay-Rell

fam ya flows weak, u'll neva be seen up in the lime light// he's garbage in 20 lines i'ma end this mans life//
me on my knees :laugh: , i rather burn in hell// u the one up in them hotells// suckin dick till ya troat swells//
i roll solo, i say fuck havin a team// i eat crews, u a snack fa' me, cause u sweet like crispy creams//
cats on this site been fuelin my fire// tellin me cats is hotter than rell// half of these cats wont even sell//
I'm talkin sinamen i hope u come 2 vote// so u see the type of lines that's gon make yo ass chokein//
but back snikerz u a lame stop flow// on this mic u gettin fucked cause like hookers u always open//
i throw shots// thru the tops// of ya throwback brims// or let my m-16 shake the leaves off the tree to ya timbs//
i snatch ya chick// then get her bent off that E&J// but after this battle i'ma forget ya name so u gon be singin like alicia k//
i keep shit live like EA sports// you shawn b// and i'm like kg// on the court//
now i'm done flowin and I won wit no doubt// yo flows dumb// & like gum// u got chewed and spit back out// WUT"S GOOD!!!
:shoot: :shoot:

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THAT'S THE REVISED VERSION!!
WIT OUT TYPOS

yo good battle and nice structure but jey he had better flow and harder punches and
Snikerz you where alright maybe work on your flow and come up with harder punches but good battle

v= jay better punches better flow hit up my link under my sig

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Can't vote officially yet 'cause I lack the 100 posts. But here's an unofficial vote for Snikerz. Neither one of these verses had anything that stood out. Stuff I'd like to see in the future from you guys: more complex rhymes and a lot more wordplay. Snikerz already has decent flow but could improve in other areas.

4real 4real yall niggas is trash.holla at ya boy ahillz if u really ready.im half way on i shouldnt even b on this shit 4 real,get at me.please