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Simple..
Cheq.. ya verse had no personals, weak structure.. the punches you had were creative, but you had to explain them. A good wordplay based punch shouldn't need to be explained. The *'s n shit.. big no-no. again, coulda been directed at anyone, it reeks of a pre-write.
The punches were tight, original with excellent wordplay, altho they seemed forced, pre-written as said, and worded all wrong. Your own undoin..
Ill.. tight verse.. structure/flow all on point, apart from the one line... but it was used in a tight way, good punch, original and creative.
Punches always hit, good personals. as said, the last bar was the highlight of the battle.. real nice.
Basically a pretty tight verse... took this no problem
Vote - Illtalic
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I Polled............................................ ....
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I'll let u off then..
-goes lookin for the culprit-
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It was Provoke.. cos i set the post count to 200+.. in case u were wonderin.
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ittalic - structure was good.......flow was on target.......vocab was pretty good......nice multis.......i was feelin the wordplay.......most of ya punches connected........good personals.....
cheq - structure was wack......flow was hard to get.......vocab was nice.........multis were great........good wordplay........some of ya punches were ok.........ok personals.......
breakdown -
structure - ittalic
flow - ittalic
vocab - cheq
multis - cheq
wordplay - tie
punches - ittalic
personals - ittalic
conclusion - ittalic takes this in structure, flow, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote.......
VOTE - ITTALIC
