Definately Deserves To Be There
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Definately Deserves To Be There
this was one of the best pieces i've read in awhile. everything i read from you is off the hook but this one was crazy. i like how you put different perspectives into this piece. you mentioned alot of the pro's and con's of being underground and commercial and alot of good points. keep writin cuz everything u write is mad good..
^Let's Make It Happen :PQuote:
Originally Posted by Nic Caesar
ive peeped this ish before... not gonna rub your back and tellyou how dope it was though... it made me think a little... you had really ill multis... rhyme scheme wwas tight... flow had some scratchy parts...
good stuff overall...
at da beginning i thought the flow was awkward but as i got more glued to it i didnt even notice it any more. and to be truth ful dis shit taught me a lot of shit man. ill stuff keep writing dawg
Bringing Back a Classic.....You disagree...I'll E-Shoot You~~~~~ :p
Nice drop man, u really did the topic justice, and showed others who may have never noticed the difference what often seperates rap from hip-hop. Multi's and vocab, shined through this piece though, and u really showed alot of other cats who tried, how to do it properly.
ill.
I ask again why isn't this in legends?
^ I have decided...I will Up this...Until it gets In... :evilgrin:Quote:
Originally Posted by ELEETE
All i Say is...
Legends.....
^ Let's make it Happen...Motha~~~Fuc*ers~~~~ :thumbup:Quote:
Originally Posted by Bigg E Z
Leeeeeegeeeeeeeeeeends!!!!
Lol..
Not..
This..
Fiasco..
Again..
Lmao..
It should be in though..
But this will only cause more arguments.. Once again.. Lol..
Pz..
This is way over rated, its a used up topic. There was simple vocab and a simple rhyme scheme. Only a couple lines really came out to me... It was just average in my eyes... Dont see why people DR it... sorry, but thats how i feel...
^Thanks for your thoughts...I took a topic..everyone is so familliar with...Quote:
Originally Posted by High Class
Everyone has either tried or thought about writing...and Made it very entertaining...at least in my eyes I did...Once again...I thank you for your feed... :thumbup:
aight you have nice flow and all that but whenever i go in here you always wrtie rhymes about the same goddamn topic...come original you got madd skill so start flaunting by expanding your horizons bro.
One love.
I wrote two pieces about HIP-HOP...
You probaly only seen those two pieces of mine.... :laugh2:
I really liked it......some complex rhyming u got in there, and multi's a plenty.........
but the important thing is the topic itself. Did you really convey what you're trying to say? And I think you did that well....good job.
peace.
that was so fuckin good it brought a tear to my eye *no shit* best i've read since i got here.........
:thumbup: thnx for that....
Legends it is well deserved with out a doubt *still cryin*
Pen you gotta make this an Audio dawg........I have to hear this live!!! FUCK an use your Nominal beat!!! Im telling you dawg!!! Ill be your manager!!! WE WOULD MAKE MILLIONS!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHH!!! MWAHAHAAHA!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! :evilgrin:
Amazing piece here.. loved every bit of it while reading..
so well thought out.. mad props man
someone said used up topic?... well, it'll never be used again cause u killed it.. no ones surpassing this.. dope as hell
^Thank You...This was posted 1-13-04...Two months later...it's still getting love...wow..Thanks everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thumbup:Quote:
Originally Posted by RASCAL
SO YOUR SAYING YOULL DO WHAT I ASK!!!???? WE'LL MAKE MILLIONS!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! :evilgrin:Quote:
Originally Posted by Spoken Word
^We are in the money~~~We in the Money~~~we in the money ~~
:evil:
I'lll post just to make the thread look cooler...
Damn, Penny...
I've always liked your work, but this was just sick...
It's cliched, but this would sound incredible on audio!
Great back and forth banter, great views shown by both.
The clarity is amazing, how you can climb in their heads show what's inside.
It's almost like hearing it on radio, very real, man.
Great feel, Great emotion, even better message...excellent piece, Penny.
I'd view it as Legendary, if no one's nominated it (I'm sure they have already), I certainly will.
On a side note:
It's very flattering that someone of your talent sees ME as their favorite Open Mic'er...Thank you!
Meh..this was ok
OK dammit...so it was dope as fuck...imagry and multis were all there. Seemd like you were favoring the undeground side? Ill piece Penny...can I call you Penny?
You opinion here would be appreciated
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119422
One for the money..To for the shoe..three for..
My BAnd~~My band~~~My band~~~
2 months later your STILL upping this?
^cause I can... :)Quote:
Originally Posted by The Realist
Plus..I like this piece...not very many of my pieces I actually take time to sit down and write...this one I did...this is one of my Faav. pieces of all time... :thumbup:
You have to stop upping your old pieces and cut back from all the freeposting that you do in Open Mic.
yo that shit was dope for real. sht for real.for real tho bro a real. some dope shit for real
^^HaHa... see what you get when you up this? that's just funny...
*smiles*
Its pretty good, I dont know this is the first open mic ive ever read so im not sure what to think of it. I liked it, multies were good, very nice touch. Great flow, but the approach..i didnt like, i didnt think the piece was deep enough. well watever its just my opinion..
-Kid-
:laugh2: Quit crying bitch...Quote:
Originally Posted by Credz