Telekinetic vs B.rantis

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It would be nice to end this before it gets like 500 views lol

Please vote! People sleep too damn much. I got like 50 battle credits from voting but cant start one because nobody else will vote

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This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this
B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis)
opening is alright... punch was ok, personal is alright
Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED
alright personal, not that hard hitting though... follow through is pretty good
You got no referrals, yea really nobody would unless they was insane
Cause just the lines above shattered you like a window I bring the pain (window pain)
not that good of a punch, seemed more like a filler
Im rippin veins an arteries you haven't even began to scratch the surface
You're just a freeloader on this sight uppin post counts your only purpose
follow through isnt a bad punch, metaphor in the setup is decent
I just ended this guys amazing 5 post career with 10 lines that I wrote
Shit I didn't even have to throw any punch lines cause this kids the joke
good ending.. punch was alright, meta was straight

over all your flow was alright, no multis, metaphors werent bad, personals were ok, your verse was decent



Like John Travolta you should face it Telekinetic
cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks
ok attemp at a personal punch, needs a little rewording.. follow through was alright. nothing to hard
unless you bummy like yourself, broke with an 86 chevy,
like it says your a flyweight, my rhymes are heavy
metaphor on the follow through is alright.. setup could have come off better
My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours
tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse
follow through concept was alright, set up was alright
and i know u thinkin' " why B. Game bustin on me?"
because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3
lol good follow through punch
Your 3-3 im sorry to say its the unwritten law,
im keepin a donut in my loss column, ur simply played out like pogs
sort of a weak ending.. not much of a punch, or meta.. nothing to hard

your verse was alright, had flow, no multis.. the metaphors were alright


Vote- telekinetic
He hit with harder punchs, and hada little bit better metaphors..

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telekenetic took this, harder punches, better wordpla, an a format plus complexity took this battle for him!!!

nice battle of both peeps just one had to take it!!
peace



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Hit this up with a vote its been up for like a month lol

Tele gets this cause he had some nice punches and personals. B had tight metas tho. Both of yalls flow as good, easy read for me. Structure was alil off but who cares bout structure if the flow still works
Please take the time to hit this up. Thanks guys, much appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109779

Ive had like 20 votes from people that cant vote yet. Were you high postin fuckers at
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Back to poll my vote for Tele now that I have 100+ posts.
Please check this out guys and return the favor. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110047

Thanks for doin that man. Much appreciated
Still need one more before this shit has like 1000 sleeping views

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Shit posted the wrong thread http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074

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Sombodys got to end this shit. Its been up forever.

ayy this shit is close.. not really but it sounds better that way

tele- nice verse alot of good punches.. looked weak compared to ya other verses
tho

B- lookin good keep elevated you lost but you win some and lose some
good luck elevatin'

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Soemone end this shit it is like 5 months old lol Really

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