Time..

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Sup son,yo good concept,nice rhyme scheme,flow,vocabe,imagery,some nice met's and wordplay was also there.

Peace

West!!!!! welcome back dawg!!!
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wow my mouth hurts from speakin time to myself
over and over again
but concept was good
felt the words u put out
meta's didnt jump out at me but they were
there and complimented ur piece.

that was a nice read I though it was good....ya structure was excellent...ya Flow was Good...ya Vocab was great Not much For me to say.....a bit short but it worked......all and all a good read

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NiceNess

Good immagery , rhymes were dope an on point, ..flow was there..concept was worked out nicely,..

Vocab was on point for this drop, and i enjoyed readin this, ..keep dropin maniZZLe..

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Dope piece
I loved it
I felt the whole concept
Keep dropping

This was a really nice drop hommie, you always droppin good flows. I liked the vocab, structure was good, and the topic was good as well. This was an all around nice verse. Showed alot of skill through this piece right here hommie...
---> Could you return the favor and peep " Deacon Diss " in my sig, and tell me what you think. Not unless you already did...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion