All ya just stfu
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All ya just stfu
LOSERS.. BATTLE OR FUCK OFF NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Dumbass' s .................................................. ....Lmao.. Just be quiet.. ur hurting my eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fuck off..You will be banned now
uppin this
fuck dissing you this shit was cool, but it did'nt make me laugh or hype or frown or feel anything...so I can tell you put no emotion into it or I would have felt it...I like the way you rhyme but rhymes without emotion become boring after a while
lmao @ this response
Flow especially in the first half was great - Vocab was good as well. It was nice the way you went back and forth, thought this line could use a little work:
Uh?!...Fuck..I didnt this would lead to us Both Ending in Defeat
'cause you left out "think" or "know" or whatever word you were planning on using so it's actually a bit stretched - which to me seems doubly compounded in a closing line.
thought this part was especially good:
"i inconspicuosly rip all my feelings apart...
...getting angered to the edge,like a d-tone in Mozart
like a horse and cart...one w/out the other is a grave Formality
there it is now you've guessed it,i've got a split Personality"
Very nice work overall - hit something in my sig if you can, preferably Lamentations.
still no multi's? :^/
Lol...Multi's work sometimes
but for a piece like this
it wudda just ruined it