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Originally posted by Killjoy
Come on know,we all know
who got this game rap up
in the bag from his flow,
meta's and punches????????
Vote= Deacon
My bad I can't vote yet but
When I do It is going to be
somthing nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good battle from both
Emcee's.
>>>>>>>>>>>PEACE TO THE MIDDLE EAST>>>>>>>>>>>
Dont tell me how to write topicals..i would own you anyday..hoQuote:
Originally posted by The Realist
p.s. Stix, try and flip the topic next time... or choose a topic that can be apporached anyway...this one was pretty straight forward
i was in a rush..i did what i could w/ the time....
Uppin some votes for deac....you Sek-C bitch
Umm uppin guess.....come on just a couple more votes...blah blah desperation when its allowed....
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Opener - Twizzle
Flow - Deacon
Emotion - Deacon
Rhyme Scheme - both
Metas - Deacon
Vocab - Deacon
Topic - Deacon
Closer - Deacon
overall - Decon
well deacon got this,even twizzle admits this,but cus this is in elite ill break it down,
deacon - showed some real good imagery, i built up a mental picture from your verse,
really got into it and stayed interested,flow was good,some peeps dont realise
you dont have to have the same length lines to achieve good flow, vocab worked well
overall a dope story, real good piece.
twizzle - felt you went more in to the poetry side, flow was a little hard to catch at first
but it improved later, some good lines, i liked the first 4 lines of the 3rd stanza,
overall good drop, just not as good as deacons
twizzle did well but he didnt grasp the topic as well as deacon, deacon a a nice little twist
with his story,twizzles was more just a straightforward talking about love, didnt real bring anything
new,
vote = deacon
I Polled A Last Vote.
-Axe