flow - RI
structure -RI
multis -RI
punches -RI
wordplay -RI
Overall-RI
Vote:RI
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ON3
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flow - RI
structure -RI
multis -RI
punches -RI
wordplay -RI
Overall-RI
Vote:RI
Reason:Its Obvious!.......................................... ......................
ON3
1st got this better flow shitty structure but better punches. remixed your verse was aight but nothing stood out and frankly the lines weren't rhyming well and you had no hard punches. 1st check my battle with j-yo and vote, thanks
onee
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flow - RI
structure -RI
multis -RI
punches -RI
wordplay -RI
Overall-RI
Vote:RI
^ He took this with out a dought, everything was better... ^
--> Return the Favor and make a honest flow Here It would be much appriciated...
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-High Class a.k.a Confusion
Remixed took this hands down like 6;30. even though his flow was falling off alot, he still had somewhat of punchlines and his verses better overall....
vote - remixed.
ohhh, and please vote for this.
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wow how fucked up was 1st to wrecks structure.??? lol
Breakdown--
Punches-R.I
Flow-R.I
Enjoyment-R.I
Creativity-Both..1st was kinda witty
Sustainment-R.I
Overall-R.I
not a bad piece but i say ya change ya structure
it'll be more affective for flow..pz
MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...065#post975065
yo i hit this so hit up that link above plz^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I'll give the edge to Remix but it was close. The metas and multis were ok for both but I think !st lost it with the ender.
Can't poll but this will help up the thread.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
hey mods can i get this closed, no one is voting on this battle.
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1st took this easily. neither had incredible flow or structure or anything, but 1st was harder than remixed....
vote-1st
good battle
1tw you need to work on your structure and need to come harder when your doing a verse, read other battles and see how they do it..
i think remixed got this battle because of his punches and structure but you need to work on your flow
Remixed Illusion Is DQ'ed For Excessive Upping... Read The Rules.
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