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UUUUUUPPPPINNN!!!!
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Gotta say, MJ, this was a good battle ~ my first wit' a "femcee", but you gotta good point, that was a decent snap that Veterano missed... We'll have to do this again in a few ~n~ see how that comes out. THIS ain't ova yet tho'! Much L & R too...
PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93272
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Mary~Jane-
- good rhyme in first line but was week
- soft follow up
- good middle
I write love thats why I get it, I write true thats why you sweat it
You prewrite your verse, then when its posted hit edit/
^^^ that was tight
- not bad ending
JDeaZy -
- great intro!
- good follow up and good rhyme scheme
- good middle... strong
- nice ending
its clear who won this battle
JDeaz
Thx fa tha input^^
UPPINNNN.......................................... .............
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Call me tha Surgeonverge
as I cut ya consiousness
wit' tha razor in tha dome
pullin' ya to tha verge
of this abyss ~ fathomless
depth within tha mind
Tha Basics
Flow - MJ
Punches - MJ
Personals - MJ
Originality - MJ
Vote = Tha Lady
Errything else was irrelevant coz MJ murked the 4 basics.