http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93377
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Yo shit was tight dude.
good flow, kinda basic but i like the thaughts u had
some words repeated a few times, not bad but use more vocab
otherwise good shit
hit my battle if u can....
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93377
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Yo shit was tight dude.
good flow, kinda basic but i like the thaughts u had
some words repeated a few times, not bad but use more vocab
otherwise good shit
hit my battle if u can....
werd
fuck u and your weak ass shit.dat shit licks nuts
^^^ Hmm.....I feel anger from you my friend. I suggest you calm down. You;re to small to start somethin with me. plez just calm down.
too small dude ill fuck u up.u dont wanna fuck wit CTF.we run dis shit down here in da dirty tenn.mane u da small weak bitch who need to shut da fuck up.u kno da bizzness!!!?!
good flow
nice structure
good descriptive words (imagery)
nice closing
overall this was a pretty good drop
Return the favor, dogg:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93392
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Originally posted by C-TownsFinest5
too small dude ill fuck u up.u dont wanna fuck wit CTF.we run dis shit down here in da dirty tenn.mane u da small weak bitch who need to shut da fuck up.u kno da bizzness!!!?!
Bitch shut the fuck up and get out of my fuckin thread. Like I said your ass is to weak and whack for me. Don't think I didnt see that whack shit you posted.
thanks for the feedback. I'll hit u upQuote:
Originally posted by Jay-R
good flow
nice structure
good descriptive words (imagery)
nice closing
overall this was a pretty good drop
Return the favor, dogg:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93392
nice drop overall 7.5/10 ...keep ya head held high
uppin
stio sleepin
uppin
whats up play your piece flowed well, ended well, some good lines stood out great. Only thing i would work on is uppin the vocab a lil bit but this was a good piece
peace
thanx man, uppin
uppin