severe wins this easily
champ...man you need help
go to WEC and find out what structure is and then maybe
you can drop a decent verse..but that was wack
severe has some work to do also..but at least his structure
was half way decent...punches didnt really hit and his wordplay
wasn't that good..but it was easier to read overall
so.....
poll vote=sever lyrics
champ needs to proofread his shit before his drops his verse
just some free advice