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Oli Dogg
1st of im'a say fuck you *billabong*,
cus ill roll you up and smoke you, like dem stoners cheek and *chong*(up in smoke),
you came on to rb showing of dat branded *name*,
you cudnt play sports at school cus you got no *game*,
listen boy i dnt giv a *fuck*, ill fuck you *up*,
people respect me on this site bitch, so good *luck*,
so unlucky dude i jst murked u *bitches*,
and i wudnt post your battle cus ull have people in fuckin *stitches*.
Dont *outline* your *punches*. your shouldn't have too.
Lots of Boring and Used concepts.total=3/10
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billabong
here me out
nigga u call your self a rap haha//
you should be on jeny jones with that kinda shit//
your raps r no good they sound like shit on a slong//
aint nothin wrong with billabong//
go back to where u came from bitch//
u aint not thug//
my punches punch harder than mike tysons punches//
bitch u betta back da fuck up unless u wanna get fucked up//
All i can say is this is very bad. Ryhme scheme was off.
punches were played.last line was horrible.total=0.5/10
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Vote=Oli
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yo print nigga who u b talk shit like dat wont u go and shut the fuck up unless u want to get fucked up what kinda name is "print"
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uppin niggas............................................ .................................................. .................
peace....
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UPPIN (3)CMON YALL VOTE.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............................PZ
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Oli tookk this cuz of "harder" hittin punches...
both verses were wack as shit, but since Im here
ima let you know who won...
you both should go to tutorials... (W.E.C.) and
learn about structure, punches, wordplay, vocab and multies...
just elevate kids...
Ashy
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YEH CORSE MAN.................................UPPIN (4) CMON .................................................. ...............................PZ
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yo ppl dont hate peace......
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yo any mods out there that close dis battle caz no ones voteing. .
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and i also have 2 battles goin on and dont want to get banned............................................ .................................................
peace......
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shit was wack as fuck
oli wins cuz the guy sucked worse than ROOKIE
anyway my vote oli
wordplay-none
vocab-none
flow-shit
opener-shit
closer-shit
personals-shit
punches-shit but oli tried atleast
overal-oli
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ITE UPPIN(4).......................................... ........................HERBAL U BITCH LOL............................................... .....................PZ
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Oli Dogg
1st of im'a say fuck you *billabong*,
cus ill roll you up and smoke you, like dem stoners cheek and *chong*(up in smoke),
you came on to rb showing of dat branded *name*,
you cudnt play sports at school cus you got no *game*,
listen boy i dnt giv a *fuck*, ill fuck you *up*,
people respect me on this site bitch, so good *luck*,
so unlucky dude i jst murked u *bitches*,
and i wudnt post your battle cus ull have people in fuckin *stitches*.
Dont *outline* your *punches*. your shouldn't have too.
Lots of Boring and Used concepts.total=3/10
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billabong
here me out
nigga u call your self a rap haha//
you should be on jeny jones with that kinda shit//
your raps r no good they sound like shit on a slong//
aint nothin wrong with billabong//
go back to where u came from bitch//
u aint not thug//
my punches punch harder than mike tysons punches//
bitch u betta back da fuck up unless u wanna get fucked up//
All i can say is this is very bad. Ryhme scheme was off.
punches were played.last line was horrible.total=0.5/10
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Vote=Oli
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Totally agree with Print above me....................weak battle really, but there was a clear winner
