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Anyways First no hate...
Second Unfortunately I have a problem that I cant poll vote so if a mod or an administrator see this posts please give my vote to count for whoever I choose..
How its broken down.
Multi's = Fatal
Vocab = Game
Punches = Game
Wordplay = Game
Flo = Fatal
Vote = 3-2 Game by default
Anyways Remember No hate I always give a little spit for the loser...
Anyway hit my battle vs chris wood 3
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...&postid=704616
Also check my two poetic pieces in poetic scriptures forum titled "Eating me Inside" and "Spiritual"
This man is Insane trying to beat game, in game's own game/
Busting litle kid rhymes... You lame/
you have a bettter chance trying suck didck quik to make yourself a name/
and have fame known as " The Lyrically Unstable"...what's his name?? Oh yeah Fatal!//
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uppin phatly c mon wher d votes.........attttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tttttttttttttttttttttttt
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Votes????????????????????????????i wasnt feelin how they aint no vote sdrop da link ill be legible soon...voteeeeeeeeeeee
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not a whole lot of punches or wordplay here, i saw too much newbie shit like puttin quotes around rhymin words. ima have to go with the one with the best flow since everuthin else was wack
vote=game insane
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Originally posted by ][\/][.O.B
Sorry i cant vote but ill hit this up with feedback
flow=game
punches=nither realy but game
lol nobody realy had anythin so i dont know just forget the rest
Game u had sum good punches and nice flow, so u take this one.
Work on ur punches tho, try to cum up wit better ones, make similier and metas too along wit more multi's, cuz u got skill
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KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//
Fatal your verse was pretty basic, and ur flow? run on sentences like crazy, where are the comas?
keep elivatin dog u got potential
can ya'll hit this up with a vote in return for this feedback, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=3
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fatal lyrics had this i think with a betta verse overall, mind you the flow was evens. Fatal had beta punches and some funny lines,
my lyrics are "devastatin" so strong rippin through mcs like they armor "penatratin" and bitch im my rhymes are as vicious as "satan"/
you notin but a dick rydah and a "hata"(hater) bitch ive served so many people youd think i was a "waiter"/
so i vote fatal lyrics.........
can you guys check my battles with shylock and justin vincible.....
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thanx....................................uppin.... .................................................. ................
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by XL4REAL
[B]fatal lyrics had this i think with a betta verse overall, mind you the flow was evens. Fatal had beta punches and some funny lines,
my lyrics are "devastatin" so strong rippin through mcs like they armor "penatratin" and bitch im my rhymes are as vicious as "satan"/
you notin but a dick rydah and a "hata"(hater) bitch ive served so many people youd think i was a "waiter"/
so i vote fatal lyrics.........
couldnt have said it better
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Fatal lyrics.........Game ha d a verse WAck...........No Hate.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................
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dont forget to poll vote.............................................. ..................................................
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yo...i gotta give this to game...i mean neither really dropped a fly verse...but i gotta give it to game cuz fatals shyt was crazy over used...just borin shyt...
an game...an three leeged table can stand by-itself...next time u may wanta say a 2 legged table, an pears are fruit, i think u meant peers...meanin people
ps...u wanna battle game? lookin for competition...so holla at me an well drop on monday...or tommorow...peace...(uspit first)
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uppin...................uppin...............uppin. ..................................................
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7 curse id eta ya shit
up
iLL TELL EVERYONE NOW I CAME WEAK AN FUK IN MY MIND
HAD TO DROP IT QUICK...CUZ MY COMP KEEPS SHUTIN DOWN
trUST ME IVE BEAT ALOT BETTER GUYS THEN FATAL HEAR
AN YEA 7 IF U WANT IT SET IT UP BUT MY RULES
UPPIN FOR ONE MORE VOTE
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by ][\/][.O.B
[B]Sorry i cant vote but ill hit this up with feedback
flow=game
punches=nither realy but game
lol nobody realy had anythin so i dont know just forget the rest
Game u had sum good punches and nice flow, so u take this one.
Work on ur punches tho, try to cum up wit better ones, make similier and metas too along wit more multi's, cuz u got skill
fav line
KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//
Fatal your verse was pretty basic, and ur flow? run on sentences like crazy, where are the comas?
keep elivatin dog u got potential
word^^^
