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verbal rapist had this in my opinion peep my battle at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show.................
i seen no effort in Feirce's verse whatsoever
i give this to verbal for his attempt to win............................................... ...........................................
Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought
Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There
Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up
Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well
Good Job Both Of Ya
VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE
Hit dis up dawg, bit of a merkin on the cat by me but oh well, a fair vote is needed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...899#post608899
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VR gets my Vote. Fierce Shadow didn't rythme at certain times and VR had better Flow and Punches. Nothing Spectacular , but he got the JOB done , and sometimes thats all you need to do around here. Also FS , if your gonna translate your verse for us , use Parenthesis , otherwise it looks like its part of ya rythme and it convolutes the verse.
VOTE - Verbal Rapist
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
Need 1 vote , but an "Honest" one
Peace , CrazeE
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i agree with him^ and verbal here is a tipQuote:
Originally posted by Black.Jack
Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought
Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There
Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up
Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well
Good Job Both Of Ya
VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE
stop uppin or you'll get disqualified....the max is 5 ups
aight...just tryin to save you
props to both
peace
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i giv this 1 to verbalist ... shadow had no flow at all ......and if u got the time to get killed i wanna battle u shadow..!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>
nice...Quote:
Originally posted by Black.Jack
Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought
Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There
Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up
Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well
Good Job Both Of Ya
VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE
verbal got this by wordplay
good effort 2 u both.............................................. ..................