Well, yea it was on the poetic tip. Didn't have any sort of flow to it. Imagery is good, and vocabulary was used nicely. Had a picture in my mind as well. Not bad girl, I hope Sand's treatin' you good, or I'll text-whip his ass . . . LOL
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Well, yea it was on the poetic tip. Didn't have any sort of flow to it. Imagery is good, and vocabulary was used nicely. Had a picture in my mind as well. Not bad girl, I hope Sand's treatin' you good, or I'll text-whip his ass . . . LOL
thank you weezy.......and wow Blunt-MC kinda of in shock that you would reply to my shit but thank you alot....i appreciate it...
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