Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
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Originally Posted by
Ronin
Ur girl is jonesing for this dick i enjoy watching her constantly beg
Once i got stuck it in her Centipied all over it, i walked away like i had a million legs
--- this makes no sense. I see what u were going for but nah bruh...
This fat fuck downs burgers n kegs at family bbqs his cholesterol a big concern
Flips out If Aorta is bad at a restaurant, would care less if his took a wrong turn
--- Jeff foxworthy called, he wants his wp back...and ur flip was bleh....
Id love to watch you burn in hell and laugh as the flames scorch ur flesh
I watch Deformation take place then shoot where u stand right in the fucking chest
--- garb
U stress how u have a diverse group of homies that race shit it aint you
So if i Punctuation friend im going to make sure i have a Sharp Point! too
--- punctuation/punked ur asian. Nah bruh. Hell nah....
Music to my ears hearing shots rang through, guns like rhythme in these hands
Beef watch me get Voilin, my Classical dangerous when barrels makes more sound then ur fucking school band
--- just......No.
Vs
every vote against this dude, he complains like a female
Most of yo bars are soo washed up they come with a wax and a detail
--- no wp....first bar no wp gj.......
always being sarcastic faggot, this genius aint really brolic
keep being a smart ass cause after i drop you, i'll be sure to kick knowledge
--- still no wp......
ya girl jaw game is so flame, she happy u cant please her
after i beat it up, i leave her foaming at the mouth without signs of a seizure
--- no wp.......
this clowns votes are a joke, fuck the IT factor, dude gay
Your boat been up shits creek soo long, Penny Wise considers you a roommate
--- no wp.......
When you got cooked by Bomb u vanished like a doomsday prepper
you were soo damn salty, im sure now u been diagnosed with high blood pressure
--- and once again no wp.
Wtf knowp verse had zero wordplay, but it was way better than Joe's, but Joe actually tried to follow the rules of the battle so as bad as his shit was I gotta go with him.
Knowp do u know what wp is? Seriously wtf.
V. Fucking cringe........Joe Boston
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This
I agree with both.. Kinda hard to break anything down without seemingly being completely negative.
V.Joe
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
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Originally Posted by
Authentic.
I agree with both.. Kinda hard to break anything down without seemingly being completely negative.
V.Joe
Why the fuck would u quote me as if I wrote that garbage
U must want the hands
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This nigga quoted my vote lmao
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
2-2 tie. need a few more votes to get this closed.
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
(Disclaimer..idk whats played out or not. Dont @me.)
Joe Brookline:
Centipede- forced. The over all bar made no sense
Aorta- wp works. Bar was trash.
Deformation- wp works kinda. But bar is trash
Puncuation- wp dont work. Over all bar wasnt bad
Violin/vile&- wp slaps. Bar is gritty. I like this one
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Nah, P
Washed-played wp. But it connects
Smart ass-not really wp. More word Association. Also trash
Foam/seizure- again, not a wp. But overall the bar works
Boat/pennywise-played out connections. It factor? U wilding. Trash
Salty/blood pressure- decent enough.
So overall know p had the better verse.
Joe had the best line w his closer.
Also since this is a wp battle...and know p refused to drop a single word play....
VOTE: ARLINGTON HEIGHTS JOSEPH
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
Joe -
Ur girl is jonesing for this dick i enjoy watching her constantly beg
Once i got stuck it in her Centipied all over it, i walked away like i had a million legs
...cool...
This fat fuck downs burgers n kegs at family bbqs his cholesterol a big concern
Flips out If Aorta is bad at a restaurant, would care less if his took a wrong turn
...aorta didn't really fit...
Id love to watch you burn in hell and laugh as the flames scorch ur flesh
I watch Deformation take place then shoot where u stand right in the fucking chest
...meh not bad...
U stress how u have a diverse group of homies that race shit it aint you
So if i Punctuation friend im going to make sure i have a Sharp Point! too
...good...
Music to my ears hearing shots rang through, guns like rhythme in these hands
Beef watch me get Voilin, my Classical dangerous when barrels makes more sound then ur fucking school band
...too wordy but ok...
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Knowp-
every vote against this dude, he complains like a female
Most of yo bars are soo washed up they come with a wax and a detail
..meh ok...
always being sarcastic faggot, this genius aint really brolic
keep being a smart ass cause after i drop you, i'll be sure to kick knowledge
...nice...
ya girl jaw game is so flame, she happy u cant please her
after i beat it up, i leave her foaming at the mouth without signs of a seizure
...haha funny..
this clowns votes are a joke, fuck the IT factor, dude gay
Your boat been up shits creek soo long, Penny Wise considers you a roommate
....cool...
When you got cooked by Bomb u vanished like a doomsday prepper
you were soo damn salty, im sure now u been diagnosed with high blood pressure
..meh..
Again I see Knowp takin this. I like bars from both of you but a few were meh. Joe I know its always been your style but a couple were just too long and wordy to me. Be more direct. Knowp you used some ok wordplay but your shit is funny in a sarcastic way and hits harder in a certain sense. Keep it up guys..
V/knowp
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
[QUOTE=Joe Boston;8882038]
@KnowP
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Ur girl is jonesing for this dick i enjoy watching her constantly beg
Once i got stuck it in her Centipied all over it, i walked away like i had a million legs
(this isn't a punch, and u could walk away with just 2 legs so, the centipede flip wouldn't serve a purpose here)
This fat fuck downs burgers n kegs at family bbqs his cholesterol a big concern
Flips out If Aorta is bad at a restaurant, would care less if his took a wrong turn
( again,, same above, not a punch....)
Id love to watch you burn in hell and laugh as the flames scorch ur flesh
I watch Deformation take place then shoot where u stand right in the fucking chest
(scorch ur flesh/ fuckin chest.....this borders on laziness)
U stress how u have a diverse group of homies that race shit it aint you
So if i Punctuation friend im going to make sure i have a Sharp Point! too
(this is probably the best bar so far, and its not that much of a twist or clever)
Music to my ears hearing shots rang through, guns like rhythme in these hands
Beef watch me get Voilin, my Classical dangerous when barrels makes more sound then ur fucking school band
( again.... same issue...if u look at the route u took u repeated the same format for your punches....so all ya bars are kinda the same..like if u called em fat for 5 bars in different ways, after a while its just the same bar with different words ...
Centipede( use spell check)/Aorta/punctuation/violin......u did it 4 times in a 5 bar battle)....
U should try to diversify your bars a bit... you've been here a minute so I don't know if u look at your structure but its repetitive here...Gd luck...
every vote against this dude, he complains like a female
Most of yo bars are soo washed up they come with a wax and a detail
( this is a good idea with bad wording... the " your ___ is so ____ that ____ set up is tricky of it aint humorous or has a personal thrown in there)
always being sarcastic faggot, this genius aint really brolic
keep being a smart ass cause after i drop you, i'll be sure to kick knowledge
( this is a decent bar,,, I think it does the job as far as who u are facing)
ya girl jaw game is so flame, she happy u cant please her
after i beat it up, i leave her foaming at the mouth without signs of a seizure
( again... decent attempt , bad wording...)
this clowns votes are a joke, fuck the IT factor, dude gay
Your boat been up shits creek soo long, Penny Wise considers you a roommate
( this is good, coulda been Great with a better set up but I wont nitpick, its a starting point...)
When you got cooked by Bomb u vanished like a doomsday prepper
you were soo damn salty, im sure now u been diagnosed with high blood pressure
( no, u basically are just callin him fat which has been done a million times and didn't add anything new or different to the concept)
I'd say that there was a lack of originality by both of u, I think u two should both work on clever angles, wordplay and just putting a new twist to old concepts...especially when this is probably the 100th time you've battles each other so it gets a lil bland after a while..
Overall P had the better verse since Boston was lazier than ive previously seen,,,, not really much of a read by either parties,,,, elevate fellows, make rapbattles great again....
V- Know P....
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
Knowp had the more entertaining read for me.. Wordplay was executed smoother.. Bar of the battle to me was kick knowledge line.. My vote might not count but if it do KnowP got it... Good shit fellas
Vote doesnt count
-Staff
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
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Originally Posted by
BIG BROTHER
Knowp had the more entertaining read for me.. Wordplay was executed smoother.. Bar of the battle to me was kick knowledge line.. My vote might not count but if it do KnowP got it... Good shit fellas
Vote doesnt count
-Staff
Explain your vote better
4-3 Knowp uppin
Re: Knowp vs Joe Boston (Wordplay Only) - OPEN FOR VOTES
Im a bit confused as well. KnowP didnt drop a single wordplay bar in the battle. I like the lines you did drop, foaming at the mouth was cool, wax and detail was aight, high blood pressure was a let down thought thst doomsday prepper set up was cool but the punch was a let down. Fact remains that you didnt use any wordplay in a wordplay battle ...
the only wordplay that was decent from Joe was Aorta - but the wording and concept by the finish were awful. Calssical(l) was a decent attempt but needs better surrounding support to work, punctuation was a stretch and a half and i laughed a tthe sheer fact you tried that and with, again, better support and set up it may have worked. Overall meh verse, but your opponent didnt use wp at all.
vote Joe.