Letterman vs daveDILLY [daveDILLY wins 5-4]

Letterman - the way you started was very awkward, not to mention the backwards SnapBack and ugly button up that's was literally buttoned up all the way to the top. There was a million too many miracle references and the only bar that stood out to me was the swing and a miss. Very disappointing drop...

daveDILLY - there seemed to be more concepts but. It hung that actually connected hard. The line that stood out the most to me was the glossed lips, which was actually funny. Other than that, dropping the n-bomb was smooth but I wouldn't suggest. I say you got this based on substance but not by much.

Vote - daveDILLY

Moral of the story: Conviction is a part of presentation

All these mom kitchen/button up/backwards snapback/hesitant delivery jokes @ Letterman prove you can't talk about certain things while your presentation says the complete opposite

I mean, you could but when your delivery is off & you have choppy flow it reflects the confidence in what you say

Also, the Miracle references took away from Dave. You can't roast someone by mentioning another battler all throughout your verse

Presentation.

This man Dave.
"Ion give a fuck"
Got me dying laughing, I THOUGHT you was gonna spazz at the end I'm like DAAAYUUMMMM - aw he fucked up lol

I'm not too sure what to think, Dave had 3 lines that could have hit. He had better presentation than Letterman though.
I thought Letterman's bars could have been better if he advertised himself in a different manner.

Vote: Davey Jones

4-3 dilly

Anymore votes please

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@Fresh you haven't voted yet lol

Letterman wasn't feeling alot of your stuff man.

Swing n a miss / over the head was iight but soo generic.. the scheme u had going after that was iight..

The clean house / and text wasn't doing it for me.

Miracle boy was blehh

All around bases /all around basis was cool

Other then that wasn't feeling it man. You had a lotttt of filler in there



Dave

Ok, the first line when ur like "so lets just take a chill pill" and then u do that stupid laugh like "huhuhh" or some shit had me dyin lol

so u had : win more votes if u tossed ur hips n glossed ur lips was funny but not very effective

pullin ur leg like kids with dumbass questions was iight
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caught a body / cheerleading team

Tharts about it man. You didn't have much material here



Ok well this battle is close as fuck. I think its literally a toss up. Letterman ur verse was not nearly as good as u usally put up... Felt there was too many pauses that weren't warranted from the caliber of the punch u were droppin. You also just had almost no content in here other then a couple punches that kinda stood out.

Dave u had better style I think, and I think u could drop some dope shit (style wise) if you put more effort into it and memorized ur words. Other then that, ur verse was very fillerish too. U had the cheerleader line and pulling ur leg line. I do respect ur attaempt at freestyling tho that shit takes some balls so kudos on that.

While DD edges this on style, I think I've got Letterman edging this in material. DD's style wasn't enough to compensate for lettermans material so hes gonna get my vote.

v/Letterman

4-4

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Originally Posted by Letterman

4-4

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Even tho it over yet. Good battle bro!!

Yeah, good battle @daveDILLY

come on 1 more vote

4-4

@BROKE LESNAR @Smog @Mr.Write

2 min video battle can someone please drop a vote.. its 4-4

Nothing I can say that really stands out different from what the others had stated. @lettwrman ur quality prevented your bars from actually making a difference in impact cause in person wise ur persona and delivery in general helps big time. Some of ur bars were cool nothing too shabby. Tbh nothing wow'd me just an alright verse. @daveDILLY ur better factor play great in ur favor as ur delivery was on point in some area and u involved nice presence but why the half face. Freestyle tho?? Seemed like u was reading something. Idk this battle was just a cool thing as it involved video and visual but it had little to no attempt at being great or put forth effort.

If I have to vote I actually like Dave dilly he had ok ish concepts but his approach to it and presence was overall better which u have to take into account since it is a visual battle as well not just the bars

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Originally Posted by Mr.Write

Nothing I can say that really stands out different from what the others had stated. @lettwrman ur quality prevented your bars from actually making a difference in impact cause in person wise ur persona and delivery in general helps big time. Some of ur bars were cool nothing too shabby. Tbh nothing wow'd me just an alright verse. @daveDILLY ur better factor play great in ur favor as ur delivery was on point in some area and u involved nice presence but why the half face. Freestyle tho?? Seemed like u was reading something. Idk this battle was just a cool thing as it involved video and visual but it had little to no attempt at being great or put forth effort.

If I have to vote I actually like Dave dilly he had ok ish concepts but his approach to it and presence was overall better which u have to take into account since it is a visual battle as well not just the bars

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30 percent freestyle


thanks for the vote
@Fresh close this and give me my win please 5-4