Re: My Acceptance Speech.
This was probably the best drop I've read all day in my perspective. I observed your multis and rhyme schemes with careful measures and 85 percent of the time they really hit me. I give your multis an 8/10. your rhyme scheme an 8.5/10. My enjoyment through this was probably a 7.5/10. Story 9/10. Good job overall.
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Thanks man! It's appreciated
Re: My Acceptance Speech.
this is a really nice piece . I wish I could write like some o you guys on here.
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It was decent work. Good vocabulary and imagery. I had a hard time finding the flow. I liked the subject and thought you did it well
Over all 7/10
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This was a nice piece you've dropped, and i thought u was just a pop star..
this was very creative, great story line, nice lyrics/vocabulary, delv was on point it puts me in the place same as i was reading 9/10 good drop
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you should turn this into a song
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