joeboston vs Vinzr

Vinzr i thought it was wayyyyy to late to have an nba 2nd round punch lines [[eastern conference finals was Bulls vs Heat not celtics] 2nd line you left out a word so your punch was confusing and the rest wasnt very hard hitting. You need to work on being direct w/ your lines. jae i saw you attempted some witt w/ your opener but it wasnt really hard hitting, the only line i liked from you was the zantac line I LOL'ed cuz i seen the commercials and they have like 1,000 side effects. So in the end MVGT - Jae

diffrent breakdown from wat i usually see but thanks for the feed and gl again vinzr

Watch this bitch get flipped over like the Amtrak
Cuz he couldnt be the shit with the side affects of a Zantac

vs.

It’s clear that this guy has no life, he’s 30 years old and lives on the net
He bounces around the court but he’s weakass literally fails to break a sweat
You say you’re a man, but it’s only your name...you’re gettin’ sloppy, joe
Gettin’ your face stuffed between two buns, you sure know how to get in there, bro

Pretty weak battle. I've seen better outta Vinzr but he clearly won this shit 'cause he actually landed some effective punches and personals.

cheers for votes/feed guys.

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joey b
Only beef this Aussie's got is a Menu from the Outback
One Blow from my right hand will take out his whole fucking Meatrack
not really feeling the punch, nothin to witty about it
Watch this bitch get flipped over like the Amtrak
Cuz he couldnt be the shit with the side affects of a Zantac
set up could be better, its a meeeh though
This bitch couldnt throw a punch if it was shown in 3D at the IMAX
Ur styles r uglier than Moe Sizlak
meh
He'd Probably steal a written from Clint Eastwood then say his punches have "Sudden Impact"
claims to ride for Creational Damage but he cant "Show Me The Carfax!!!!"
if this was reworded it couldve been dope, i like the concept
He's Just another infekted Pen that ran outta ink
How the fuck he gonna handle a battle when he cant even handle one drink??
no set up kinda lame/played concept

vs

vinzer guy

Boston...You were struggling to get hits, so made your punches ignite
Packin’ in too much Heat, that you couldn’t even put up a fight*
set up needs to be reworded a bit, flow aiight punch ok
What your lackin’ on the mic, you’re makin up for in bed
Cause your men don’t any meds, when your already givin’ em a head
no real punch behind this
It’s clear that this guy has no life, he’s 30 years old and lives on the net
He bounces around the court but he’s weakass literally fails to break a sweat
meeeh kinda played concept
You say you’re a man, but it’s only your name...you’re gettin’ sloppy, joe
Gettin’ your face stuffed between two buns, you sure know how to get in there, bro
this made me LOL i liked the sloppy joe wordplay
People say their careers are tough and are hanging by a string
Clearly yours isn’t, your career is on the ground hanging by nothing
this was ok

overall this was an ez battle to judge no hate to joey but you can tell who has more experience texting here, i rated both out of what i expect from each of them individually, really i think both had 1 decent line but vinzrs connected MUCH better, if either of you want a little more feedback just message me

but my votes for : Vinzr