bongkers vs miracle

BONGKERS..

this guys a fucking hermit, he can't even talk to his daughter
so if somebody givin mir a call, then people might just start walkin on water

^creative but needs to be worded a bit better/differently..

+ your wordings generic, and those noobs you keep on versing's pathetic
on the Front lines, your search for the weak is getting worse than a medics

^nice personal..

but props on the crew homie, you were there since the birth of it right?
I bet you felt dope.. after you surrounded yourself with the worst of the site

^another nice personal here, solid build ups through out..

since your such a bitch, Ima put a fork in your damn snout
n kill you with kitchen equipment then wait for the situation to pan out

^this was cool, nothing hard hittin but it was solid..

and just for making that wack crew I'll break your nose with a right
then have RB saying fuck a TNT.. without Verizon taking over the site

^creative but could have been directed at your opponent more, talking about verizon taking over the site really is kind of irrelevant..


MIRACLE..

bongs scared as shit to fight..call him out n he'll duck
last time b-headed to a box,.... someone almost executed this fuck

^whole concept is pretty played out, wasnt bad.. its just been done before a million times..

he dont have hard hitting lines..this dudes never rapping lethal
he could watch chainsaw massacre and his texas still not attacking people

^the whole texas/text is wordplay is played out as well, not too bad once again but any bar that is played out isnt gonna hit hard..

please don't think bong'll win..cuz against me youll get slayed hoe
his skills like protein supplments at a drive thru..they got a whey to go

^not too bad but kinda basic, multis need work as well, extra syllable in the second set of multis at the end..

my freestyles are deadly!..i'd kill you without having to think of a idea
so when i kia quick one, to murk you..i dont mean crashin from fast cars in korea

^concept was solid but needed to be worded a lot better, no hate..

miracle will pull a gun out n make u shit urself...he'll be pleading thru a pm
but i'll put the 9mm to bong........... n im not talking the size of a stem

^again pretty played out, all that bong/weed/etc stuff is gettin old, try to bring punches that are more original, ask yourself if you think the punch has been used or just how unique the idea is, stay away from using concepts that are the most obvious to use..



OVERALL BREAKDOWN/VOTE:

Bongkers got this pretty easily for me, miracle has potential for sure, just needs to bring more original concepts to the table and to word his bars as effective possible, bongkers had some creative/cool stuff, liked that he went wit some personals, didnt have any haymakers but had a strong verse through out, pretty much took every catagory..

VOTE: BONGKERS