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Re: John J vs Compact
shouts out ta tdot , i had quite a vacation
but u dont go ham for ur city ... all you got is canadian bacon
that was ok..
compact, step up the complexity of ur concepts.. u got the idea down dope tho.
john, u are using punchlines ive seen on txt site for the last 5-7 years.
think up creative nameplays/wordplays and incorporate them into something..
metaphor/swag-bar. something.. got a dope rhyme scheme & with the right
wording/concept u could be really dope, keep doing ur thing.
cant vote so this is just feed.
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Re: John J vs Compact
BOTB:
ill stomp this pussy in the street for frontin with gay talk
crack out the LAWs - and u'll never see J walk
This was a pretty close battle. J had a lot of attempted WP that weren't really punches. I can't vote, but compact took this for better punches.
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Re: John J vs Compact
ill stomp this pussy in the street for frontin with gay talk
crack out the LAWs - and u'll never see J walk
vs
u better sit fast or have wrists slashed….nd livin the rest of ya life on shit bags,
better duck when the clip blast, cuz u steppin out of line..like weak bladders in six flags
close battle...i think john takes consistency and flow but i think compact had the lotb which hit pretty hard imo. I think had John J came slightly more consistent he could have taken this but i think compacts hits > john's consistency..
v/ compact
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Re: John J vs Compact
Compact: Well u had some good nameplay attempts and overall some good punches.
John J: Overall came hard good metaphore usage and multi usage
Compact u had a good verse with the nameplay attempts but i felt John J stepped up and came a little harder. Overall good battle. I just overall see John J's improvement in the metaphore category and punchlines are getting better.
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Re: John J vs Compact
^upset with the vote?
uppin
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Re: John J vs Compact
nah the question marks cus this is gettin slept on lol i dont bitch like that
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Re: John J vs Compact
ye im cooked i didnt see the "up"
bump
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Re: John J vs Compact
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Re: John J vs Compact
flow: John J
multies: John J
punches: Compact
complexity: John J
wordplay: Compact
nameplay: Compact
delivery: John J
personals: Compact
Close battle john you impressed me with overall better verses every drop
v-Compact tho for a bit harder punches