Those be Fightin words

Dropping another verse
Relentless, yeah you could call me a cut-throat
blowing you away like lines of coke
Unstoppable with a will indomitable
And a mind like a warzone inhospitable
to stupidity and idiocy accepting only brilliancy
never been found to turn down the intensity
and I got a propensity for being on top
my mind’s analyzing and strategizing nonstop
always carrying me to new places, greater heights
and I don’t need the press the attention and lights
Im in this for me, to build a legacy
To take it all and hold on indefinitely
I want to be remembered for genius and intellect
Turning the world on its head and having an effect
I’m gonna be a legend, infamous or inspiration
And even if I’m hated they’ll respect the reputation

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I'm not a professional so all I can give is my opinion... I definately heard it more then I felt it when reading. I feel you have a nice flow but was kinda all over the place in meaning - kinda like was it all the same rhyme. I think you have definate talent though.

I appreciate it and I'll keep working