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Miracle & 4rensick: You guys had some good lines. Honestly both of your first bars was enough for the entire battle. But you guys had other good lines. Solid structure, good flow, got personal and had some good punches. Just keep it up.
Adam & Nesta: Your lines were weak. Straight up. One of your lines used the word Terrorizing in reference to miracle. The language in that acknowledges that he was causing havok, which just makes you sound like a sally. Step your punches up. Whoever had the second verse needs to adjust their structure. Get personal, their names were in there, but that was it. Just get some solid concepts to punch with and go from there.
v/ mir&4ren
thanks 4 da vote
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in our battle u when out bitchlike -ur wack, i hope it sinks thru..
he like hardcore dairy queen fans, always running for the DQ/
Ya rhymes’ll never be felt…I Could drop a wack Verse and they'd still melt -
...........so ill just 'Drop a key on This Pussy' like Unlocking a Chasity Belt!!
I Could Lye To the world- Tell Them You Hot, but Might Have touble getting it To Stick-
Me? Im Establishing-Quick, And Not even Sneezin On Him would Make This Kid-Sick!!
think they just had better an more effective punches imo...like there verses more, other guys were just a little too basic with there attempted punches, think they could have executed them differently to make them possibly slightly more effective...
V/Mir-4ren.
5th UP! ^^
bobby an adam need work on wording an having actual sting in punches it seemed to be only stamentish type set ups but other then that yall had nice flow but not really a battle verse imo.. 4rens an mir on the other hand had actual punches thrown weak but enough to take this win. wording is also an issue with all of you but if yall get that down pact yall be good.
vote mir/4rens
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