Yup thanks.
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Yup thanks.
overall this was ILL.. your flow stayed consistant. as i was reading i didnt see any errors or lacking. it was a nice and smooth read. and it was very entertaining. you definitely have potential.. well ill just say it like this.. this is the ILLest shit i ended up reading on this board so far.
Quote:
I blindly follow paths
baths of sadness blast
to pasts of mourning
last memories adjourning
to free me to breathe
a breath which seethed
with intoxicative remedies
which in turn made my
….melodies
tunes of compassion
sung with a flawed passion
it was all an act, a drama
ironic the time for karma
to play it’s hand & unleash
it’s grand plan made a beast
which served as a minion
to my mental dominions
so now I strum elastic bands
racked with painful glands
constantly under pressure
to submit to a lesser
pleasure……..
But what do I say
…except
Just let me sing this day
and this was the part I was feeling the most. it was all ILL, either way. but you know what I mean.. keep the good work up. i hope you drop another one soon. i enjoyed this one..